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MissSeeker
03-03-2006, 06:19 AM
don't leave
as the evening falls
don't die away
please hear my calls
can't let you fall

once upon a time
you were so close and real
the air I breathe
time won't take away
what I feel

as you are with her
feel me sometimes
and when you kiss her
feel my vibe
we own the time

it's a broken heart
that I carry in me
to see you with her
where you will be
never again with me

the man for whom my heart beats
walks distant streets
I reach out my hands
to feel you trough the atmosphere
to feel you there

though destiny won't smile at me
I keep you here
so close and real
please remember me
once I'm not here

Rocketqueen
03-03-2006, 11:01 AM
:) The Lovley Misseeker that wrting was as in one piece as was in many and it was beautiful it puts me in mind of a oldish gospel Tune That Went Something Like This, HE WILL PICK UP THE PIECES TIME AND TIME AGAIN THERE IS NOT A BROKEN VESSEL GOD CAN,T HEAL Dont Leave As The Evening Calls dont Die Away Please Hear My Calls Can,t Let You Fall The Entire Poem Was Very Very Well Written

Finaldecision
03-03-2006, 11:21 AM
Really well-written, melancholy lyrics! But you still got lines of hope in the end, which I think is good!