Mirror

[nagpo]

I see in the mirror
A tragedy
No love for her
Hated by the ones she seeks

She's the thorn on the rose
At the bottom, you see
Been walked on by them
Raped by Gods inability

So she lies their asleep
As she awaits Death
Soon the poison kicks in
Ten minutes and she'll be dead

(note: i wrote this late last night so if their are any kind of problems its because i was tired)

[Rocketqueen]

Raped By Gods Inabilitiy thats a strong line i, liked it i dont see any problems with it none at all :) i felt a beautiful dark compassion

[nagpo]

thank u:)

[MissSeeker]

She's the thorn on the rose
At the bottom, you see
Been walked on by them
Raped by Gods inability

Very good!

[Rocketqueen]

thank u:) :) your more welcome

[nagpo]

She's the thorn on the rose
At the bottom, you see
Been walked on by them
Raped by Gods inability

Very good!
:) thank u to:)