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Old 09-17-2005, 09:20 PM   #1
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On Edge

On Edge

Sleep eludes…ducking and weaving
Like a fighter proving a point…
Outlasting his opponent
Through sheer tenacity and willpower…
On the brink, walking a tightrope
One misstep…
It’s a long way to the ground…
Pay attention, and the walk is a thrill a second…
Come…walk with me to the edge
And beyond…
Take my hand in case either of us slips…
We can support one another
It will be the thrills in our walk that are remembered…
No more falling and landing
On the cold, harsh ground…alone
Crossing the threshold together we see
The fighter, willpower spent
Leave himself open to receive Sleep’s final blissful blow…

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In sleep he sang to me, in dreams he came
That voice which calls to me and speaks my name
And do I dream again, for now I find
The phantom of the opera is there...inside my mind

Christine/ Phantom Of The Opera


Abondon thought and let the dream decend....
Point of No Return/Phantom Of The Opera


You will forever remain the music
And I…the song you sing
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Old 09-18-2005, 09:43 PM   #2
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sleeps eludes ducking and fighting and weaving like a fighter proving a point well written
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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