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Old 06-14-2005, 08:21 PM   #1
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Each line upon your face
A badge well earned
Worked for and displayed proudly
Each crease upon your brow
Reminders of the expressions and thoughts
That have shown themselves so openly
With every year you mellow…
Growing deeper with the passing of seasons
Your heart remains forever young
Such a heart is surely blessed to achieve greater purpose
Everything in life
Happens for a reason…
Follow the map you have been shown….
It’s in front of your eyes…
You will be led to where you belong
You will find your home

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In sleep he sang to me, in dreams he came
That voice which calls to me and speaks my name
And do I dream again, for now I find
The phantom of the opera is there...inside my mind

Christine/ Phantom Of The Opera


Abondon thought and let the dream decend....
Point of No Return/Phantom Of The Opera


You will forever remain the music
And I…the song you sing
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Old 06-15-2005, 12:59 AM   #2
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well written
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 06-15-2005, 12:39 PM   #3
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"Follow the map you have been shown….
It’s in front of your eyes…
You will be led to where you belong
You will find your home"
Wow, I like it.
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Old 06-17-2005, 04:18 PM   #4
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thats the part i liked it ,
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 06-20-2005, 04:04 PM   #5
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thanks guys...glad you enjoyed it...
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In sleep he sang to me, in dreams he came
That voice which calls to me and speaks my name
And do I dream again, for now I find
The phantom of the opera is there...inside my mind

Christine/ Phantom Of The Opera


Abondon thought and let the dream decend....
Point of No Return/Phantom Of The Opera


You will forever remain the music
And I…the song you sing
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Old 08-04-2005, 01:57 PM   #6
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i loved it , ANN
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