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Old 05-04-2005, 05:29 AM   #1
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My Storm

Come to me in the heart of my Storm
I will keep you safe
If you keep me warm
Im slipping away

Bring daylight to my heart made of night
I will keep you alive
Im slipping from life

[Chorus]
Sobriety laughs at me
I'm high on my own mortality
And this catatonia in which I hang
Will be the factor that slays me

Dancing with death
It swings so eloquently on every breath
Dancing with insanity
When all else has failed me
I dance with death
Merrily we're hand in hand
So this dance rages on
Until you come to me
In the heart of my storm

{Chorus 2}
Anxiety mocks my intent
A handspan away from being sent
To the eternal damnation in which I lie
And that will certainly slay me
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Old 05-04-2005, 10:56 AM   #2
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Divine Writing ...Awsome Stuff
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 05-04-2005, 02:43 PM   #3
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excellent writing...
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In sleep he sang to me, in dreams he came
That voice which calls to me and speaks my name
And do I dream again, for now I find
The phantom of the opera is there...inside my mind

Christine/ Phantom Of The Opera


Abondon thought and let the dream decend....
Point of No Return/Phantom Of The Opera


You will forever remain the music
And I…the song you sing
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Old 05-04-2005, 04:27 PM   #4
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That was writting awesomly!
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Old 05-05-2005, 12:53 AM   #5
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Thank you very much!!!
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Old 05-05-2005, 11:33 AM   #6
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pleasure was all mine Haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa Your Nuts Must Have Been All In Place When You Wrote Such A Good One HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
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Old 05-07-2005, 09:11 PM   #7
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LOVE this part:

Dancing with death
It swings so eloquently on every breath
Dancing with insanity
When all else has failed me
I dance with death
Merrily we're hand in hand
So this dance rages on
Until you come to me
In the heart of my storm
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Old 05-09-2005, 02:04 AM   #8
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Quote: (Originally Posted by creedsister) pleasure was all mine Haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa Your Nuts Must Have Been All In Place When You Wrote Such A Good One HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA


Actually, to be quite honest, one was sitting on the kitchen table while the other one was out somewhere getting beaten to death by my ex gf/babys mom. lol
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WHOOOOOOO HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA What Excerise Workout For Those Nuts Haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
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