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Old 04-08-2005, 04:14 AM   #1
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Failing Me

I took a walk to the bottom of the hill the other day
Such an empty search for my sanity
I looked over the distance to where I last felt peace
And begged to the heavens for serenity

[Chorus]
All I got was eptiness
Failing me once again
Trust so strong But let down hard
Everything I thought was real
Another empty search
Another empty search
A little white lie in the sky

I traveled down the road many have traveled before
Another empty search for my soul
I whispered into the dark, for just one spark of hope
The darkness leaving me so unfulfilled

(Chorus)

I need a chance at life again
A chance to live, to breathe on my own
I want to change my life around
But its so hard, when you fall on the only road you know
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Old 04-08-2005, 08:24 AM   #2
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a very "searching" piece...may you find what you are looking for and get what you deserve.

Does it have a title?
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In sleep he sang to me, in dreams he came
That voice which calls to me and speaks my name
And do I dream again, for now I find
The phantom of the opera is there...inside my mind

Christine/ Phantom Of The Opera


Abondon thought and let the dream decend....
Point of No Return/Phantom Of The Opera


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And I…the song you sing
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Old 04-08-2005, 09:48 AM   #3
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its called Failing Me
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Old 04-08-2005, 11:02 AM   #4
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....begged to the heavens...i liked that line....
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Old 04-08-2005, 11:07 AM   #5
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that was really good!
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Old 04-10-2005, 07:52 PM   #6
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Wow, very cool!

That last line is a killer:

I want to change my life around
But its so hard, when you fall on the only road you know

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