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Old 03-08-2005, 12:01 PM   #1
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Swept Away By The Dive I Took In The Ocean Before I Dived I was Caught and swept away Before I Closed My Eyes Ready To Take the Dive As I waited To Fall In The Rapid Plunge When I opend My eyes I was Swept Away And Never Felt The Plunge Of The Dive The Water Is High I cant Swim But I dive Anyway Only To Get Swept Away And Hear Your Voice Caught up and swept by just a small sweep of you,re saving stregnth is more rapid that the rushing tide below swept away by the dive i took in the ocean before i dived i was caught and swept away before i closed my eyes ready to take the dive i waited to fall in the rapid plunge below when i opend my eyes i was swept away and never felt the impact of the plunge I cant swim but i took the dive anyway only to get swept away and hear your voice caught up and swept away By just a small sweep of you,re saving stregnth is more rapid than the rushing tide below higher than any mountian Higher Than all heaven and all earth swept away in sweet rapture of power that shows thy self by power of mercy divine so i walk the line Swept In The Midst Of A Free Fall Swept Away From My Dive
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 03-09-2005, 07:21 PM   #2
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i was swept away and never felt the impact of the plunge
I cant swim but i took the dive anyway
only to get swept away and hear your voice
caught up and swept away By just a small sweep of you,re saving stregnth
is more rapid than the rushing tide below
higher than any mountian
Higher Than all heaven and all earth


i liked the whole piece, cs...but this part just kinda really stuck out...
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In sleep he sang to me, in dreams he came
That voice which calls to me and speaks my name
And do I dream again, for now I find
The phantom of the opera is there...inside my mind

Christine/ Phantom Of The Opera


Abondon thought and let the dream decend....
Point of No Return/Phantom Of The Opera


You will forever remain the music
And I…the song you sing
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Old 03-10-2005, 01:31 AM   #3
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thank you
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 03-10-2005, 02:06 PM   #4
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I agree with Ann the whole peiece was good!It really was!
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The music in my head loud...
Joyful noises sound...
Happiness surrounds...
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