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Old 03-10-2005, 10:55 PM   #1
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Inamorata

Alrighty...my sophomore effort. I started this one a couple of nights ago & just finished it. You'll start to notice from A LOT of my poems that I love the one word titles with neat words.


"Inamorata"

The most fragile of all flowers
As the lily among the thorns
Careful is she not to wilt in this world
In her sweet little serenity

Still yet it scars her core...

Inside an hourglass glance of moonlight
Our lives seem minute as to the speck of a star
To flicker in our moment
To fade out when itís gone

But daughter of blossoms
Refuses to never falter
Nor brush off all the briars
That settle upon our hopeful hearts

I wish I could see her
See the way she shines into those eyes
I wish I could be there
Fill a vacancy where Iím left hollow inside



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Old 03-10-2005, 11:10 PM   #2
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really enjoyed reading that...very creative and touching...thanks for sharing it...keep writing...
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In sleep he sang to me, in dreams he came
That voice which calls to me and speaks my name
And do I dream again, for now I find
The phantom of the opera is there...inside my mind

Christine/ Phantom Of The Opera


Abondon thought and let the dream decend....
Point of No Return/Phantom Of The Opera


You will forever remain the music
And IÖthe song you sing
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Old 03-11-2005, 12:31 AM   #3
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Man Im Gonna Have To Get up Early To Top That One My Way Of Saying I Like It
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 03-11-2005, 12:34 AM   #4
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Thankyou both!!!
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Old 03-11-2005, 12:42 AM   #5
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your welcome
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 03-11-2005, 01:10 AM   #6
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Keep in touch over at the "Faith/Religion" forum. I think I'll start putting up some of my religious poems over there.
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Old 03-11-2005, 06:18 PM   #7
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nice man, i wish i could write stuff like that.
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*And I know*

*Youíre a part of me*

*And itís your song*

*that sets me free*

*I sing it while*

*I feel I canít hold on*

*I sing tonight*

*cause it comforts me*

"You laugh at me because i'm different, I laugh at you because you're all the same"


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Old 03-11-2005, 11:42 PM   #8
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i know it it was awsome i give it a 10 all the way
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Old 03-12-2005, 10:46 PM   #9
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flowers nice i loved it!
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Dancing around...
With joy found...
The music in my head loud...
Joyful noises sound...
Happiness surrounds...
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