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Old 10-06-2003, 03:56 AM   #1
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My New Song

This is titled CASTLE OF LOVE

1st Verse

Your days of hapiness are gone
I can tell something is wrong
To make it you must be strong
If you're weak you wont last long

It's time to take a stand

Chorus

Just take love by the hand
And fly away to the promise land
And won't it be grand
Playing in the clean white sand

WE CAN BUILD A CASTLE OF LOVE



2nd Verse

Don't let them see your tears
Don't let them smell your fears
This has gone on for many years

All your worries can go away
Just close your eyes and hear me say

Chorus

You can take love by the hand
And fly away to the promise land
And won't it be grand
Playing in the clean white sand

WE'VE BUILT A CASTLE OF LOVE

Bridge

Even if we cry
We can build a moat
The tears won't drown us out
So stand up and shout

Chorus

I'm gonna take love by the hand
And fly away to the promise land
And won't it be grand
Playing in the clean white sand

WE'RE LIVING IN A CASTLE OF LOVE (repeat line till end)





tell me what u think it's supposed to be in the vein of "Dont Stop Dancing" and "Inside Us All"
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Old 10-06-2003, 11:45 AM   #2
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That was an awesome song Dan! I loved the lyrics. I especially loved the chorus and the bridge was really good. Got anymore!?
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Old 10-06-2003, 11:46 AM   #3
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no i thought that all up at 2 o'clock last night
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Old 10-06-2003, 11:47 AM   #4
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Pretty good. You should try writing more!
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Old 10-06-2003, 12:06 PM   #5
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Wow, that is actually a good love song and not cheesy. Congratulations on that one Dan, I'm impressed.
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Old 02-28-2005, 02:37 AM   #6
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i'm bumping this for nostalgia

this song was freaking hilarious.... the sh*t you can think up at 2am. i always pictured David Hasselhoff singing it like the song "I Believe" off the Baywatch soundtrack

u can preview that song here (if u have RealPlayer):

I Believe
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Old 02-28-2005, 04:48 AM   #7
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i liked it
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 02-28-2005, 10:33 PM   #8
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hey that was so good it was awesome!!
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Old 03-01-2005, 10:25 AM   #9
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I know It
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great dan i loved it
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