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Old 02-22-2005, 07:07 PM   #1
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thoughts

My eyes warm..
Crying in sight.
The thoughts take flight.
Thoughts that stay with me.
A new relationship makes me happy.
But the thoughts that haunt.
Stap me right through the heart.
The tears make a crooked path down my cheek.
I fear the thought.
But I am weak.
My spirts dim.
Too afraid to depend on us.
Thoughts still racing.
The shadows changing.
As night moves on.
I should sleep...
But the thoughts keep me awake.
We all have our thoughts
Our doubts.
Thoughts of jealously that overcame me...
Thoughts of anger I felt.
So scared of messing up.
Afriad of ruining this.
Thoughts I hope dont escape from me.
Thoughts Im glad stay in my head.
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Old 02-22-2005, 09:09 PM   #2
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Awsome Awsome Awsomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 02-22-2005, 11:18 PM   #3
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thanx this one just came too me.But in a way i think theres more to be added i dont know maybe its fine the way it is.
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Old 02-22-2005, 11:23 PM   #4
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its cool the way it is
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 02-23-2005, 04:53 PM   #5
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thanx.
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Old 02-23-2005, 05:00 PM   #6
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i wish i could write stuff like you guys do, you are all so f**king fantastic
and that was fantastic aswell HR2004
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Old 02-23-2005, 09:15 PM   #7
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Quote: (Originally Posted by HR2004) thanx.
your welcome
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Old 02-24-2005, 12:00 AM   #8
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Quote: (Originally Posted by Anna1011) i wish i could write stuff like you guys do, you are all so f**king fantastic
and that was fantastic aswell HR2004

LoL your stuff is good too but thanks for the complement!
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