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Old 02-15-2005, 11:28 PM   #1
Ann Allusion
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The Raven

The Raven

Child of Odhin
Crone and Sun
Bringer of messages
On dark rainbow wings
The raven cries…
The spirit dies…is born again.

Mischievous intelligence
Healing one
Bringer of mystery
Death and war
Speaking from an unseen world
The raven cries…
The spirit dies…is born again

All is not what it may seem
We hide our inner fears
Behind the masks
Of spider spun glass
Where no one sees our tears

Child of Odhin
Crone and sun
Bringer of the night
Soft darkness with dancing stars
The raven cries…
The spirit dies…is born again

©2005
Susan D.
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In sleep he sang to me, in dreams he came
That voice which calls to me and speaks my name
And do I dream again, for now I find
The phantom of the opera is there...inside my mind

Christine/ Phantom Of The Opera


Abondon thought and let the dream decend....
Point of No Return/Phantom Of The Opera


You will forever remain the music
And I…the song you sing
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Old 02-16-2005, 01:18 AM   #2
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AWSOME!!!
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 02-16-2005, 11:53 AM   #3
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glad you enjoyed it, CS...
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In sleep he sang to me, in dreams he came
That voice which calls to me and speaks my name
And do I dream again, for now I find
The phantom of the opera is there...inside my mind

Christine/ Phantom Of The Opera


Abondon thought and let the dream decend....
Point of No Return/Phantom Of The Opera


You will forever remain the music
And I…the song you sing
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Old 02-16-2005, 12:07 PM   #4
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Quote: (Originally Posted by Ann Allusion) glad you enjoyed it, CS...
I Did
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 02-16-2005, 03:19 PM   #5
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i really liked it!!
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Dancing around...
With joy found...
The music in my head loud...
Joyful noises sound...
Happiness surrounds...
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Old 02-16-2005, 05:40 PM   #6
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you are all soo good at writing stuff on here, really liked it
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*And I know*

*You’re a part of me*

*And it’s your song*

*that sets me free*

*I sing it while*

*I feel I can’t hold on*

*I sing tonight*

*cause it comforts me*

"You laugh at me because i'm different, I laugh at you because you're all the same"


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