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Old 01-25-2005, 06:12 PM   #1
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Reveal

The begining of a new.
Things that i knew were true.
The way we looked at each other.
But now im not sure.
I held you tight.
You didn't push away.
Still I dont know the feelings you hide inside.
I put mine away as well.
For i fear what i might reveal.
But it seems you have a way of seeing right through me.
Wish i knew the feelings you keep behind those bars.
For some reason i cant see that far.
You smile at me and i sink deep into those eyes of yours.
Your laugh warms me up inside.
Your soft touch excites me.
You hold me tight and i dont want to let go.
But i do.
still to me a mystery you are.
wont you let me see behind the locked bars.
Unlock your heart let me in.
Reveal to me the you.
The you inside.
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The music in my head loud...
Joyful noises sound...
Happiness surrounds...

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Old 01-26-2005, 03:12 AM   #2
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Nice
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 01-26-2005, 01:56 PM   #3
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Quote: nice

"ditto"...
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In sleep he sang to me, in dreams he came
That voice which calls to me and speaks my name
And do I dream again, for now I find
The phantom of the opera is there...inside my mind

Christine/ Phantom Of The Opera


Abondon thought and let the dream decend....
Point of No Return/Phantom Of The Opera


You will forever remain the music
And I…the song you sing
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Old 01-26-2005, 04:11 PM   #4
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thank you both i changed my signature too.lol
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