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Old 12-14-2004, 12:43 AM   #1
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The Arrow

[[The Arrow]]

I've closed the doors
And fought the wars
My pain, my anger
It sings like yours
I've built the wall
Still standing tall
Ive beaten you
But still I fall

I've been shot down
The arrow flew too true
I've fallen from the sky
But I can't give in to you

I lost the greater cause
I've slammed into the earth
But from my ashes rise
The phoenix's flaming birth

I came from the ashes
And danced in the sun
My body and the flames
Our spirits are one
You lit the torch
With a single arrow I fell
But now Im brighter than the sun
And hotter than the depths of hell

In my flesh the arrow head stays
I dormant reminder of the ways
You shot me down and and broke my wings
But now this Bird of fire sings
To be a reminder before your eyes
That you can't bring me down
No matter how true the arrow flies
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Old 12-14-2004, 01:18 AM   #2
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 12-14-2004, 11:33 AM   #3
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quite expressive...
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Old 12-14-2004, 12:27 PM   #4
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Quote: (Originally Posted by Ann Allusion) quite expressive...
you bet it was, Strong Writing The Opening, Rocked And The Ending, WHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
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