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Old 11-01-2004, 08:30 PM   #1
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Sometimes My Friend Things Are Harder Than They Need To Me Sometimes Its Because Its Meant To Be When We Try With Heart And Soul And Body And Mind And Spirt These Things We Cant Get Ahead Of Cant Get Ahead Of We Know Who Is The Head Of It All I CANT FALL even if i wanted too But Im Trying When Your Called Your Called You Cant Run From It Noir Can You Control It I Try Step And Step At A Time Sometimes Not Perfect But I Try Anyaway Sometimes Its A Pleasure To Breathe And When You Do You Only Breathe The Truth Try Try As The River Breaks Again Foward To A New Day Sometimes We do as were Told Breaking Every Law Of Logic Beyond Self But Through It All We Stand Tall Sometimes What We Should Do We Dont Do And Sometimes What We Wanna Do We Cant Not Yet Not Yet Love Is Always Stronger Than Any Reason Of Wrong Or Right I Love You We Try So Hard So Hard And All I Know Is Im Not Safe When Im Gone And I Miss You Just Too Too Much And I Dont Feel Right When Im Away To Long I Feel Your Strong And So Am I But The Stronger They Are The Harder They Fall Is It Just Like A Magic How We Get Right Back Up Again Let God Do The Rest Giving Up Is The One Thing It Seems We Cant Do But Try Try Try Holding On Holding On
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Old 11-01-2004, 09:37 PM   #2
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that was great
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Old 11-01-2004, 10:48 PM   #3
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no not really but thanks
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Old 11-01-2004, 11:44 PM   #4
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i thought it was good any poety is its like giving your soul to the world to read and trying is a good thing to always do. and even if you feel you havent done your best at least you tried just like your poem always try to hold on.
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Old 11-02-2004, 01:24 AM   #5
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Quote: (Originally Posted by HR2004) i thought it was good any poety is its like giving your soul to the world to read and trying is a good thing to always do. and even if you feel you havent done your best at least you tried just like your poem always try to hold on.
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Old 11-02-2004, 01:40 PM   #6
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anything written with honesty and from the heart is poetry...and what i read was just that...enjoyed that one muchly, CS...
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Old 11-02-2004, 09:59 PM   #7
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Quote: (Originally Posted by Ann Allusion) anything written with honesty and from the heart is poetry...and what i read was just that...enjoyed that one muchly, CS...
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