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Old 08-21-2004, 04:25 PM   #1
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As If

As If

Each word strikes
With venomous precision
Painful thoughts linger
Digging up visions
Making it hard to let go of the past
It’s almost as if
You want it to last

As if reason
Forgot to rhyme
Demanding repayment
Of some petty crime
As if forgiveness
Passes all understanding
Is met with a silence
That’s less than commanding

These eyes look forward
There’s better tomorrows
Life’s darkest days filled
With love…lost their sorrows
Yet, in your words the shadows are cast
It’s almost as if
You want it to last

In your words…my old friend...
The shadows are cast
As if it’s too hard
To let go of the past…..

2004
Susan D.


a little something about these lyrics...lets just say, they were inspired by my latest attempt to listen to AB...technically...they are great, all the way around...will always wish them the best...but those lyrics, just push my buttons..

~peace

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Old 08-22-2004, 12:07 AM   #2
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Awsome It was one of those that make ya think
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Old 08-22-2004, 08:21 PM   #3
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thinking can be a good thing...
thanks for commenting, creedsister....
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Old 08-22-2004, 10:42 PM   #4
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Hahaha
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Old 08-28-2004, 12:29 PM   #5
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Quote: (Originally Posted by Ann Allusion) a little something about these lyrics...lets just say, they were inspired by my latest attempt to listen to AB...technically...they are great, all the way around...will always wish them the best...but those lyrics, just push my buttons..

~peace

LOL, well, your words were an interesting way to express the above sentiment ...As usual, nicely done!
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