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Old 08-01-2004, 06:26 PM   #1
Ann Allusion
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A Breath of Life

A Breath of Life

In a world of contradictions
Searching for some sanity
Famine and destruction
Disappear behind the vanity
Of many who have lost their way
Forgetting who they are…
Looking for the love they’ve hidden
Deep beneath their scars

Though we feel unworthy
And let desperation in
One ray of light, a breath of life
The healing can begins…

Alone we walk in darkness
Each step, one more in time
Blinded by confusion
No idea what we’ll find
Should we bare our heart and soul
No secrets would remain
Pure as the day we were born
Washed clean by gentle rain

Though we feel unworthy
And let desperation in
One ray of light, a breath of life
The healing can begin…

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Susan D.
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Old 08-01-2004, 10:48 PM   #2
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should we bare our heart and soul no secret would remain Thats True I loved that line,
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 08-02-2004, 11:04 AM   #3
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thanks for reading, CS...
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Old 08-02-2004, 11:47 AM   #4
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 08-02-2004, 01:00 PM   #5
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Wow, Ann, that was great! So true in so many ways.
I love this part:

Alone we walk in darkness
Each step, one more in time
Blinded by confusion
No idea what we’ll find
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they make a club and beat their brother down.
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Old 08-03-2004, 09:54 AM   #6
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