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Old 06-22-2004, 09:06 PM   #1
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Mother screaming
Father dreaming
Brother tripping
Sister slipping

No way out of hell within
Never-ending tailspin
Impossible to break away
No use trying anyway

Sister ditching
Brother twitching
Father bumbling
Mother tumbling

No way out of hell within
Choking on a safety pin
Impossible to break away
No use trying anyway

Mother crying
Father flying
Brother dying
Sister tying

Found a way out of hell within
Dangling in an autumn wind
Impossible to feel today
No use trying anyway
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Old 06-22-2004, 11:25 PM   #2
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Wow Dogstar Love The Title, HaHaHa , That Was True Writing I Kinda Like The Last Line I Really Liked This One Choking On A Saftey Pin, Impossible To Break Away,
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 06-22-2004, 11:32 PM   #3
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One More Thing I Love The Way You Write Misery so Well,
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 06-22-2004, 11:59 PM   #4
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Hahahah, thank you, creedsister!
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Old 06-23-2004, 12:04 AM   #5
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A Big welcome To Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 06-26-2004, 01:35 AM   #6
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Quote: (Originally Posted by creedsister) One More Thing I Love The Way You Write Misery so Well,
Ha, that's very true. Kerri, you should just take all these poems and make a book, and do book tours, and travel across the country, meet all the members of Creed, and then come see all of us!
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Old 06-26-2004, 01:07 PM   #7
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HAHAHAHAHA LmAo
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Old 06-27-2004, 02:28 AM   #8
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LOL, you guys are too funny!
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Old 06-30-2004, 09:02 AM   #9
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Choking on a safety pin! Wow, girl that was coooool!!
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Old 06-30-2004, 12:21 PM   #10
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Thanks, Aimee...Nice to see ya 'round!!!
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Old 07-06-2004, 09:59 AM   #11
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Awesome, and that's all I can say!! Got to get caught up on your work!
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Old 07-06-2004, 10:46 AM   #12
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, thanks, Kris!
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