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Old 05-21-2004, 07:46 PM   #1
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From The Very First Moment

I remember the very first moment
In that very second
When I knew I cared
And I knew I wanted to hold you
And I knew I wanted be there
As long as it was with you
And I know I still want that
And I still hope you do to
But the more I want that the more it hurts
The thoughts of it ending
Making a new beginning
But its not the thought of these things
It’s the thought of another
And beginning again with them
And you with another
And I think if I should bother
Is it wrong to think this way
Not to think of you and today
So I push it aside again
To think of you
All you mean to me
And how long will it be
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Old 05-21-2004, 11:40 PM   #2
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I Fricking Loved It
Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 05-27-2004, 02:51 AM   #3
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wow! That is excellent! I can relate to that.
You are never given a wish
without being given the power to make it come true


Somewhere there's someone who dreams of your smile,
and finds in your presence that life is worth while.
So when you are lonely, remember it's true
Somebody somewhere is thinking of you
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Old 06-06-2004, 08:43 PM   #4
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hey creedguy16 that was great you touched my heart whos the lucky girl u wrote that for?
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Old 06-07-2004, 03:43 PM   #5
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Thanks HR im glad u liked it. Well her name is April and i met her through a friend. actually one of my good friends is dating her best friend so its kinda funny. but i just wrote this after thinking about wether i wanted to go out with her or not a few weeks ago. its just kinda of pointless when i think about it but i know i care for her, at least i think i do. anyway u can tell im still confusing myself so thats pretty much were this on came from. long answer for a short question but thanks again for the kind words
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Old 06-07-2004, 07:10 PM   #6
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hey are you creedguy16?that wrote the thing did u change ur s/n too rulesdontapply??let me know
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