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Old 05-04-2004, 12:22 PM   #1
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they don't understand

guilt kills you all the time
why did i go there?
if there is a god
he has fallen asleep at the wheel
lets drag him in
try him and throw away the key

how dare he tell me right and wrong
there is only good and bad
why is it wrong to end my mother's suffering
this child what life is this?

see his soliders
living by the hyprocritcal creed
their disease no different to mine
my conscience keeping me ransom

they live with rose-coloured glasses
with picket fences and the 2.3 kids
don't they see the pain in her eyes
isn't my opinion as valid as yours?

don't show me that video
of my babies suffering
my conscience does it exist?
damn this situation and this god
why can't i just run and hide?
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Old 05-04-2004, 12:56 PM   #2
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 05-04-2004, 01:08 PM   #3
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It is darkly moving and profound...the depth of devestation and hopelesness shown in your poem is tragic...
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Old 05-04-2004, 01:57 PM   #4
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Quote: (Originally Posted by goddess_bb) It is darkly moving and profound...the depth of devestation and hopelesness shown in your poem is tragic...
yes i know it, IT ROCKS, it can all be recreated it, HAHA peace out,
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 05-04-2004, 02:39 PM   #5
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Quote: see his soliders
living by the hyprocritcal creed
their disease no different to mine
my conscience keeping me ransom

That is one awesome verse. Nicely done, hide.
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Old 05-04-2004, 09:58 PM   #6
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thanks guys i must pay this one girl who inadvertenly inspires me to write quite negative things.
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Old 05-04-2004, 10:10 PM   #7
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Hahaha, that's awesome. I know what you mean. I have a few people I should thank for the same thing .
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Old 05-04-2004, 10:26 PM   #8
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Quote: (Originally Posted by Dogstar) Hahaha, that's awesome. I know what you mean. I have a few people I should thank for the same thing .

if we had only nice people in our lives what would we write about?
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Old 05-04-2004, 10:30 PM   #9
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Hehehehe, good point.
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Old 05-04-2004, 10:43 PM   #10
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Quote: (Originally Posted by Dogstar) Hehehehe, good point.

my wife is beautiful and she never nags me
a dripping tap she ain't
roast every night
my kids always listen to me
and never ask me for money

my dog rolls over on command
and my job is safe
i haven't gained a pound since high school
and gravity hasen't taken its course

i can eat nothing but donuts and coke
its heaven on a stick
here at the pearly gates
lets ask can we stay
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Old 05-04-2004, 10:51 PM   #11
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LMAO! That's awesome!!!
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Old 05-04-2004, 11:49 PM   #12
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Quote: (Originally Posted by handmedown) my wife is beautiful and she never nags me
a dripping tap she ain't
roast every night
my kids always listen to me
and never ask me for money

my dog rolls over on command
and my job is safe
i haven't gained a pound since high school
and gravity hasen't taken its course

i can eat nothing but donuts and coke
its heaven on a stick
here at the pearly gates
lets ask can we stay
my kids always listen to me and never ask for money HAHAHAHAHAHAHA
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Old 05-04-2004, 11:53 PM   #13
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Quote: (Originally Posted by creedsister) my kids always listen to me and never ask for money HAHAHAHAHAHAHA


hehehe the bank of mum and dad is always open, kids remember that and take advantage of their undying love!
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Hahahahaha, the bank of mum and dad...
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Old 05-05-2004, 12:00 AM   #15
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take advantge of their love hahahahahaha, thats true
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