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Old 03-13-2004, 04:13 PM   #1
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Tell me what u think

Jeany's Garden


A never ending of flowers abroad
Up high in the Heavens
Where the lights intensity shines bright
The aura of pontency from the Omnipotent
Scattered lights and souls of the beauty slumber
The clouds like Jade of its own from the sea
The panorama was revealed by an Angel
Layered was the soul of one
Golden hair was her mind of luster
Jade eyes was her sea of imagery
Her own flesh devoured the cradle that mounted
from hell to its own reign
The falls of waters of pearls
manipulated the very one soul
Her own flesh was gold buring in her heart
Unfurling and expansion of the brightest,
glorious light in Heaven
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Old 03-13-2004, 11:02 PM   #2
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That was good SmEeKy
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Old 03-14-2004, 12:40 AM   #3
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i liked it too really sweet
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Old 03-14-2004, 04:01 AM   #4
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thanks u guys
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Old 04-12-2004, 05:14 PM   #5
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that was deep and very beautiful!
*snaps*
snaps for you, a real poet!
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Old 04-13-2004, 02:22 PM   #6
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that was beautiful.. if I had to choose my fave part (very difficult to do), it would be this part...
Her own flesh devoured the cradle that mounted
from hell to its own reign
The falls of waters of pearls
manipulated the very one soul
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Old 04-20-2004, 06:51 PM   #7
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thanks I didnt know it was that good
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Old 05-04-2004, 01:05 PM   #8
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Again Smeeky...your talent is incrediable...I loved it
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Old 05-06-2004, 12:19 AM   #9
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thank u goddess
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Old 05-07-2004, 12:56 AM   #10
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Good poem! Wish I could write like that, but I can't write worth a squat!
Keep up the good work!
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Old 05-09-2004, 12:21 AM   #11
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oh Im sure u can
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