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Old 04-12-2004, 01:08 PM   #1
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Yeah well anyways heres a place where I will post the crap I write for my band.

The Past

Verse 1 (6 Lines)

With So Much Time Gone
I Wonder Who I Am
I Wonder Where I've Been Before

My Past Is In Thick Haze
This Blanket Hides My Fears
And I Continue On Without My Faith

But Here I Stand
So Very Alone Again
Taking All I Have To Survive

Pre-Chorus (4 Lines)

Wake Me Up
Keep Me Alive
Please Stop My Demise

I Will Live
I Must Fight
For What I Believe Is Right

It Seems To Be
The End For Me
The End For Me.....!

Chorus (3 Lines)

Lying Awake
Aware Of The Hate
Believing This Cannot Be Fate

Feeling Bound
I Break Myself Down
I Cannot Go On

You Haunt Me
Please Let Me Be
It's The Past I Must Leave

Verse 2 (6 Lines)

As I Continue On
Demons Tear Me Down
Should I Throw It All Away

Terror Takes My Dreams
This Seems So Old To Me
Why Do I Still Hold My Tears

Do I Feel The Same Again
The Way I Did Back Then
How Do I Make This End

Pre-Chorus (4 Lines)

Wake Me Up
Keep Me Alive
Please Stop My Demise

I Will Live
I Must Fight
For What I Believe Is Right

It Seems To Be
The End For Me
The End For Me.....!

Chorus (3 Lines)

Lying Awake
Aware Of The Hate
Believing This Cannot Be Fate

Feeling Bound
I Break Myself Down
I Cannot Go On

You Haunt Me
Please Let Me Be
It's The Past I Must Leave

Lead Guitar (6 Lines)

Pre-Chorus (4 Lines)

Wake Me Up
Keep Me Alive
Please Stop My Demise

I Will Live
I Must Fight
For What I Believe Is Right

It Seems To Be
The End For Me
The End For Me.....!

Chorus (3 Lines)

Lying Awake
Aware Of The Hate
Believing This Cannot Be Fate

Feeling Bound
I Break Myself Down
I Cannot Go On

You Haunt Me
Please Let Me Be
It's The Past I Must Leave

End


The Dream

Verse 1

Time and Time Again
I question what I feel
About You........about you

Are these feelings true
Do you feel the same as I do
What can I do....oh what can I do

Do I Take My Strength and Pride
Do I seal it all Inside
And Try To Make you mine

PreChorus

Now with time growing short
I reach the end alone,
Please hear my final words,
These words I hold for you

Chorus

Unfolding from my heart
These emotions that I hide
I can't believe i couldn't see
you were the only one for me
The only one for me

Lying by you as we sleep
Carefully watching you dream
I can't believe I didn't see
You are the only one for me
The only one for me

Repeat x1

Verse 2

I searched so long for somone
Could you be the one
Do I take the chance, the chance for your love

Do you notice my feelings
Does it even matter to you
Will this friendship be over, if I wanna be with you

All we do is like an eternity
It means so much to me
Why can't my dreams come true, oh please be with me

PreChorus

Now with time growing short
I reach the end alone,
Please hear my final words,
These words I hold for you

Chorus

Unfolding from my heart
These emotions that I hide
I can't believe i couldn't see
you were the only one for me
The only one for me

Lying by you as we sleep
Carefully watching you dream
I can't believe I didn't see
You are the only one for me
The only one for me

Repeat x1

End


Tell Me

Verse 1

I don't wanna see your face
I don't wanna be your dream
Your voice is so much louder now
Everything is torture to me

All I did was stand my ground
With my tired state
Now I hold my pride up high
Is this the way to make it by

Chorus

Tell Me....
That the writing on the wall will disappear
Once I fade away

Tell Me....
That this day is the only way
To make my decision of you

Verse 2

You acted like I didn't matter
So why did I continue to bother
Your feelings were not there
Yet I continue to stare

Is it true what I feel
Is the mistake I'd take
Now do I make the decision
To keep you out of my vision

Chorus

Tell Me....
That the writing on the wall will disappear
Once I fade away

Tell Me....
That this day is the only way
To make my decision of you

Break Down

Chorus

Tell Me....
That the writing on the wall will disappear
Once I fade away

Tell Me....
That this day is the only way
To make my decision of you

Chorus

Tell Me....
That the writing on the wall will disappear
Once I fade away

Tell Me....
That this day is the only way
To make my decision of you

End


Our Goodbyes

Verse 1

Time has gone, oh so fast
These memories will they last
We've all been together for so long
Sharing good times that will soon be gone

Day to Day and Night to Night
We dwell on the matter of leaving sight
Will we be missed when we leave
Is this the decision that must come to be

Chorus

So Now....
We all part ways
This Hard Feeling begs us to stay

Do we...
Remember these times
Oh do I keep them mine

Verse 2

Now its come down to this
To the day we will be missed
Are we growing sad
Why does this feel so bad

We say our last goodbyes
These feelings are not lies
Crying inside we need to shout
Accept this decision and walk the route

Chorus

So Now....
We all part ways
This Hard Feeling begs us to stay

Do We...
Remember these times
Oh do I keep them mine

Repeat x2

End


My Mistake

Verse 1

I dreamed of the mistakes I made
The mistake I made of you
Torn Inside, and throw without
These fucking feelings of my doubt

Do I truely love you
Is it something I just do
My heart aches
Knowing I hurt you

Pre Chorus

Continue to play the game
Is that what is left
I can try to seal the pain
Oh my Lord what is next

Chorus

All I wanted was to touch your face....
...and feel...
...you...
This mistake I've made
Has seperated me...
...from you...

I know you don't feel for me
But I sure feel for you
I can't repress my feelings
These tears are shed for you

Verse 2

It hurts so much to think
I can still feel my heart sink
God this pain is so real
What is the next thing I feel

It Comes down to this
The time I last see you
I won't forget what we did
The time I had with you

Pre Chorus

Continue to play the game
Is that what is left
I can try to seal the pain
Oh my Lord what is next

Chorus

All I wanted was to touch your face....
...and feel...
...you...
This mistake I've made
Has seperated me...
...from you...

I know you don't feel for me
But I sure feel for you
I can't repress my feelings
These tears are shed for you

End


Work In Progress

Short times call for large decisions
Please make the choice with precision
Haze fills the mind and takes the focus
We travel blind and stumble with disgust

Should we love the world for which we live
Or give our promises and decide to give
Things seem to always seem worse
When we finally decide to travel a set course

So far things are fine
Will they stay in line
Waiting for the day
This just may
Be the end of it all
Of it all
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Old 04-12-2004, 11:52 PM   #2
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Good stuff, Mr.Anderson!! This was my favorite line out of all of them:

Tell Me....
That the writing on the wall will disappear
Once I fade away
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Old 04-13-2004, 12:08 AM   #3
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well you have certainly being productive good work!
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Old 04-13-2004, 10:27 PM   #4
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Man That was Real, That was awsome And some of those lines really touched my Heart.
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 04-15-2004, 09:40 PM   #5
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Great stuff
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I'm a wandering soul
I'm still walking the line that leads me home
alone
All I know
I still got mountains to climb
on my own


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