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Old 02-22-2004, 04:01 PM   #1
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Tonight

Hey guys. I actually wrote this lyric last summer when I missed someone to death. I read it now and actually thought it was great, so I thougth I'd share it with you guys!

Here you go:

Quote: Tonight
My minds are surroundend
And my memorys are few
That's when I am needing you
Then the price gets taller
And it pass me through
And the views from the yesterday
Can't be turned away
There isn't time for everyone
Some one have to pay
Pay the price of loneliness...
Suffer, pain and failed

But if you could give me just one love, just one life
Just one more night

And tonight is all we got
Tonight, the very last night
Tonight, a second chance
Tonight, I know you're sad and so am I
Tonight, the very last night

So let's do a try and feel the love tonight

Need some time with you
Want to say something to you
The only chance to tell you
But how can I explane?
How it has passed me through
Life is a chance
Of everyone...Could it be me?
The door is closed now
Tears stream down my face
I would open it if life gave me more space

But if you could give me just one love, just one life
Just one more night

And tonight is all we got
Tonight, the very last night
Tonight, a second chance
Tonight, I know you're sad and so am I
Tonight, the very last night

So let's do a try and feel the love tonight
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Old 02-22-2004, 05:38 PM   #2
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Awesome Lith!!!!

Very touching!

I like to see you more often here in the Creative Corner.
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Old 02-22-2004, 05:46 PM   #3
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Yea, that was good
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Old 02-23-2004, 11:37 AM   #4
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Quote: (Originally Posted by WeatheredWoman) Awesome Lith!!!!

Very touching!

I like to see you more often here in the Creative Corner.
yes me 2 nice poem by the way
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Old 02-23-2004, 01:03 PM   #5
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Thanks... Well, I frist for me and not for CreedFeed so that's why I easilie forget to share it here!
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Old 02-23-2004, 02:06 PM   #6
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Quote: (Originally Posted by extreme_LITHIUM) Thanks... Well, I frist for me and not for CreedFeed so that's why I easilie forget to share it here!
hehe ok
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Old 02-23-2004, 02:09 PM   #7
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you know what Extrme i would like no love too see ummmm what all poems you have written you little bratt!!!! HAHA I kill me!!
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Old 02-23-2004, 02:19 PM   #8
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You mean you wanna read 'em all or just want to know why I write, where I get my insperation from and who I'm writing for??
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Old 02-23-2004, 02:26 PM   #9
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Quote: (Originally Posted by extreme_LITHIUM) You mean you wanna read 'em all or just want to know why I write, where I get my insperation from and who I'm writing for??
no not really with all the other stuff } I would just like to read theme All ya know cool stuff Loooooooooove it :
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I like the flow and how it is put together. It has a certain rhythm to it. Also it's a good topic to read about, congrats .
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Old 02-24-2004, 04:02 AM   #11
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Quote: (Originally Posted by creedsister) no not really with all the other stuff } I would just like to read theme All ya know cool stuff Loooooooooove it :

What, you wanna read like all my love songs?

Quote: (Originally Posted by Torn Signs) I like the flow and how it is put together. It has a certain rhythm to it. Also it's a good topic to read about, congrats .

Thanks, I'll keep that in mine!
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Quote: (Originally Posted by extreme_LITHIUM) What, you wanna read like all my love songs?



Thanks, I'll keep that in mine!
that would be nice!!!
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Old 03-05-2004, 09:35 AM   #13
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Quote: (Originally Posted by creedsister) that would be nice!!!

Well, my love songs is often sad once. Still wanna read 'em?
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Old 03-05-2004, 01:17 PM   #14
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Quote: (Originally Posted by extreme_LITHIUM) Well, my love songs is often sad once. Still wanna read 'em?

ooh, I do! I do! PS: This is my fave line...
The door is closed now
Tears stream down my face
I would open it if life gave me more space
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Old 03-05-2004, 01:29 PM   #15
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Quote: (Originally Posted by Aimee) ooh, I do! I do! PS: This is my fave line...
The door is closed now
Tears stream down my face
I would open it if life gave me more space
whooooo Yes I know Aim Old girl I would love to read all this deep stuff that this Bratt is Got HEy Extrme Dont Hold Back On Us Send mine In A pm Too hahaha
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