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Old 12-05-2003, 01:45 AM   #1
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"Love,hate,
i cant concentrate.
All things thoughts inside my head
somtimes make me wish i was dead.
The pain inside,i try to hide
But i cant hide it anymore.
I need release,i need the cure
Im tired of feeling empy inside,im tired of feeling dead.
Im tired of the tourment i feel inside my head.
Im so sick of feeling this way
Please come here to stay!!!

God help me!!! Jesus Christ,please break me!!!

Im sick of feeling alone!!!
Im sick of feeling cold!!!
(Im sick of feeling worthless,Im sick of it all!!!)
Im sick of feeling like im better off dead!!!
Im sick of the lies shoved inside my head!!!

God help me!!! Jesuse Christ, please break me!!!

Why does it feel like Im the only one stuck in this place?
Why does it feel like Im the only one with defeat on my face?
(Why do i feel worthless? Why do I feel alone?)
Why does it feel like Im the only one darkness falls on?
Why does it feel like Im the only one it rains on?
Why does it feel like Im the only one Your grace doesnt fall on?

God help me!!! Jesus Christ, please save this lost soul,make me whole!!!
...God save me"

Another waste of your time,haha. Well,i hope you like it.
If you dont like it,please tell me why you dont like it so
i can re-write it and make it better. Thanks all!!!
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Old 12-05-2003, 07:29 PM   #2
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hay mrseeker check your pms,,,buddy,,
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 12-05-2003, 07:33 PM   #3
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AWESOME!
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This girl only sleeps with butterflies "
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Old 12-05-2003, 08:55 PM   #4
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Thanks!!!
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Old 12-05-2003, 10:06 PM   #5
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Wow, that is overflowing with frustration!!! Terrific! I love the first line!
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Old 12-05-2003, 10:14 PM   #6
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Thanks alot
Yea, I wrote it when i was feeling very alone (and mad) so i hope that showed through the lyrics
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Old 12-05-2003, 10:17 PM   #7
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it did mrseeker we can tell this person was having REALLY BAD DAY,,,k LOL;;;;
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 12-05-2003, 10:26 PM   #8
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Yea, "this person' was me,sadly,haha
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Old 12-05-2003, 10:30 PM   #9
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yeap i will buy that,,really hehe
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Old 12-06-2003, 05:35 PM   #10
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well,it was me...
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Old 12-06-2003, 08:30 PM   #11
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ok;;;
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 12-06-2003, 08:58 PM   #12
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<!--QuoteBegin-MrSeeker+12-05-2003 09:14 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (MrSeeker @ 12-05-2003 09:14 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> Thanks alot
Yea, I wrote it when i was feeling very alone (and mad) so i hope that showed through the lyrics [/b][/quote]
It definitely did! That would make one kick-a** head-banging screaming metal song!
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Old 12-06-2003, 09:15 PM   #13
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HAHAHA!!! Thats good,because that's what I am doing. Im doing the hardcore,heavy metal stuff.
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Old 12-06-2003, 09:18 PM   #14
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COOL!
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Old 12-06-2003, 09:42 PM   #15
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Wow, another passion filled song/poem. I am really liking all of your stuff right now.
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