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Till you showed me original live acoustic song

Hello all,

I have recorded a song live on a webcam and uploaded to youtube. I would really appreciate feedback http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FQpnzK3W9ws



Verse 1:
My down state of mind
Led me to lead my life blind
To seeing what this life could be
But I was down and lost
I had fallen too far
I can't believe that this was me

Pre-Chorus
Happiness had left my eyes
Depression had surrounded my mind

Chorus
And I............
was near the edge of giving up
Till you.........
showed me, what this life could be
But I couldn't see any point to my life
I thought life would just pass me by
Till you showed me........

Verse 2
My demons are laid to rest
to better myself
I once feared what this life would be
And now my minds so clear
Inside there's no fear
I've left bedind what was once me

Pre-Chorus 2
Depression has left my eyes
Happiness now surrounds my mind

Chorus -

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Please believe me when I say these words
Don't doubt me when I tell you this

Acoustic Chorus 2
My down state of mind
Led me to lead my life blind
To seeing what this life could be
And I was near the edge of giving up
Till you showed me who I could be

Chorus -

Ending
Till you showed me,
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