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Old 06-22-2008, 04:11 PM   #1
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Hey

Just realized
That you're just
As selfish as me

A whore
With no goal
Running the streets

Took me for a night away
In my mind I'm still in bed

I awake to find that she's arrived
But now I'm closer to the end

I payed the cash
I gave my dues
And out the window she wen't
Out the window she wen't

The daily snake
Won't bite the shake
If you take it and break it

But the risk is not worth
The gain if you lose it
Oh how I've lost it

She left the sunday
That I breathed for severance
Only to never hear from her again

When I look back
I don't think I would have bothered

If I was her
I would have done
The same thing

...The same selfish thing
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Old 06-23-2008, 12:05 PM   #2
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Re: Hey

i like the idea.... Nicely arranged.....
Thanks for posting....
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Old 06-23-2008, 03:50 PM   #3
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yup, yup. Not my best by far. I'll upload more soon.
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Old 06-23-2008, 09:33 PM   #4
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Re: Hey

Quote: (Originally Posted by nagpo) yup, yup. Not my best by far. I'll upload more soon.
ya know what nagpo very well written from the way all the verses just sorta pop out from the idea of the many Interpertations i cant see that fell in all the lines wonderfully written i give it 4 stars **** Awsome somebody woke up with their groove on
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Old 06-23-2008, 10:19 PM   #5
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really? thanks a bunch
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Old 06-23-2008, 10:33 PM   #6
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Quote: (Originally Posted by nagpo) really? thanks a bunch
your welcome i love being the potery crtic its groovy
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Old 06-23-2008, 10:54 PM   #7
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lol, sounds like a good career choice.
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Old 06-23-2008, 11:22 PM   #8
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Quote: (Originally Posted by nagpo) lol, sounds like a good career choice.
Haaaaaaaaaa
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