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Old 01-17-2007, 04:11 AM   #1
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time

so i take a little time
cant believe you aint mine
then i realise im outa time

everything isnt goin in line
and my track has run off the rails
and i cant help but think
if i was better youd be mine

wish i was perfect like you
numb like you
and wonderful like you
but here i am on this cold night
all by myself and wishing
you were in my eyes in my life

so i take a little time
cant believe you aint mine
then i realise im outa time

what will it take to make u mine
cuz forever id love to be in your eyes
missing you every single day
wishing the cold nights would go away
and id awaken next to little miss waif

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Old 01-17-2007, 11:08 AM   #2
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Old 01-17-2007, 12:38 PM   #3
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Loneliness and yearning...*sigh*. Nice job, inside_us_all!
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Old 01-23-2007, 01:50 AM   #4
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You Could Be Mine, But Your Way Out Of Line, With Your Bitch Slap Rapping And Cocaine Tounge You Get Nothing Done, Its Your Will To Survive To Live, My Job To Secure Your Saftey, I Will Rise From Da Ashes Of War, And Block All Targets, Very Beautiful Inside Us All, Haaaaaaaaaaaaaaa, I.ll Be Back Nice Poem By Da Way,
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Old 01-23-2007, 06:33 PM   #5
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Re: time

Cool. I like this, though its a little depressing, lol.
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Old 01-24-2007, 09:14 PM   #6
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Quote: (Originally Posted by metalchris25) Cool. I like this, though its a little depressing, lol.
Awwwwwwwwwwwwww i really did,nt find at all deppresion but very sweet and true, there comes a need to flourish and water is needed, i call HAAAAAAAAAAAAA LMAO for the 4 ever dry spell but deppresion Is ok sometimes It water,
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