hand to hold

[metalanus]

circling around , beaten back to the past
no sense of direction and no bearings
dark clouds cover the celestrial guide
Im lost at sea tonight

pre chorus
I want to dance with you on the shore
when your gone so long
you forget what it means to be human

chorus
let me love you again
I need a hand to hold
though its been a while
you are still my home

2nd verse
been here before, said Id never return
such is life when I choose to be blind
following my own flawed judgement
thats gotten me here lost at sea tonight

pre chorus " "
chorus " "

interlude

wait the canvas is clearing in my mind
wait he paints a guiding light
wait your patince is not in vain
As God as my witness I will make it back

the water's a bed of serenity
well lay and marvel at the mystery
of redemption that we have seen
if only you too can forgive me

chorus " "

[metalanus]

i need to add more to the verses . Im also thinking of If only as the title . if anyone has suggestions for a title or verses then please share.

[Ana4Stapp]

beautiful verses ...even though im not much for poems I really liked this one...
but also it seems to fit the sad moment Im living...

[metalanus]

ive never had a girlfreind so its not about me, but parts of it are about coming back to God as a guide in my life and being lonely and feeling lost. I thought of it when I was boating last night being around water always makes me want a girl really badly.

[Rocketqueen]

Quote: (Originally Posted by metalanus)

i need to add more to the verses . Im also thinking of If only as the title . if anyone has suggestions for a title or verses then please share.

im sure you will find an amazing title yourself loved it