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02-13-2004, 03:11 AM | #1 |
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Waste of Time
"Im a total failure,im such a lie
I try to do whats right,but every time I try I end up falling face first into the dirt I get back up only to get hurt Im tired of trying and never seeming to get anywhere Im tired of looking into the air with a blank stare wondering if You're really there Beyond all that I can see,You're here waiting for me to come back You're still here waiting for me to come to You I look at myself in the mirror and break it with my hand Because of the fact that I cant understand Just why Im here in this place Here without a clue and without a trace Of why I feel so broken apart,why I feel so lost Why I keep chasing after You at any cost Beyond all that I can see You're here holding me You're still here holding my hand here in this darkend land Beyond all that I can feel,theres a part of me that knows You're real I'll find my way to You someday when Im older (but by then it may be too late) I'll trust in You when I feel my heart get colder (but by then it could be too late) I'll look for Your shoulder when I begin to cry (It could be too late) I'll put my life in Your hands before the day I die (It could be too late) I'll want You when I need a little more (Its getting late) I'll call for You before I hit the floor (Its getting late) I fell to the floor and tried to call Your name But I left the earth with a deadly stain I will never know of what its like to see You pass by Instead I see nashing of teeth and millions of the damned cry The message I leave you is not of sorrow But of a brand new hope to believe in tomorrow All you have to do to begin Is put your hope in Him." I just wrote it,hope ya like it Check out Crimson Fate (its my best)
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02-13-2004, 04:46 PM | #2 |
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that's really good! Nice job.
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Thanks alot
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02-13-2004, 06:52 PM | #4 |
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No problem......
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02-13-2004, 08:23 PM | #5 |
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thanks it was really moving seeks word
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Thanks Ta
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that was deep,pretty good!!!!!!!!!
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02-14-2004, 07:57 PM | #8 |
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Thanks although its horrible compared to my good stuff.
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well i thought it was good.
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thanks again
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