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Old 12-03-2003, 02:26 AM   #1
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Held your hand out strong to beg
Should have run away instead
Unflinching need to drive the stake
So deep inside my will to break

Snaked your way in under my skin
Should have known I couldn’t win
Smile beguiled with charm you plied
Laughed inside as you watched me slide

Glad to see you’re whole again
Nice that you don’t fret within
Before you think you have it made
Guess again, because you haven’t paid

Give in I did to mournful eyes
Should have heeded nagging whys
Wanting passive you let me twist
Made it hard for me to resist

Empty rooms full of old dreams
Silence broken by fitful screams
Rue the day you darkened my door
For now I know too well the score

Glad to see you’re whole again
Nice that you don’t fret within
Before you think you have it made
Guess again, because you haven’t paid
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Old 12-03-2003, 02:29 AM   #2
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That is amazing!!! wow,totally awesome!!!
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Old 12-03-2003, 02:46 AM   #3
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yea i like,,guess again because you havent paid
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 12-03-2003, 02:47 AM   #4
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yea i like,,guess again because you havent paid
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 12-03-2003, 07:35 AM   #5
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really awsome Dogstar
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Old 12-03-2003, 01:09 PM   #6
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Kerri, IMO, that is your best yet. Who among us hasn't felt that?? That really was outstanding!!
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Old 12-03-2003, 01:35 PM   #7
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Thanks, you guys. I'm glad everyone's enjoying them!
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Old 12-03-2003, 02:18 PM   #8
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Have to go with Teri and say it's your best yet! I love it! I know someone that poem would fit with too! Keep'em coming Kerri!



AWESOME!!!
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Old 12-10-2003, 09:51 PM   #9
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I don't know about you guys, but I can relate to that. Excellent poem!
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