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Old 02-25-2006, 06:30 PM   #1
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untittled

Living in remembrance
Wish you were here today
Cant see through the smog
Your heart's fading away

Where is my treasure?
Forbidden you shall stay
Where is my God now?
When all hopes run away

Oh sweet darlin'
Of which I'll always remember
I'll carry your heart with mine
Because you'll be buried in september

Oh my dear lover
I nearly died today
Because our lives are intwine
Now theres only hell to pay

Oh sweet darlin'
Of which I'll always remember
I'll carry your heart with mine
Because you'll be buried in september
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Old 02-26-2006, 10:55 AM   #2
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Re: untittled

Liked it.......
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Old 02-26-2006, 11:42 AM   #3
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wow............this is the first peace of poetry i have read in this forum............ and i really liked it ............. wow.......... keep up wirtting nagpo .................
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Old 02-26-2006, 12:07 PM   #4
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Re: untittled

yes if you did,nt notice thats why i gave it the>>>>>>
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Old 02-26-2006, 02:55 PM   #5
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thanks guys
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Old 02-27-2006, 08:02 AM   #6
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Well written.
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Old 02-27-2006, 09:52 AM   #7
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i agree misseeker
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