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03-02-2004, 06:54 PM | #1 |
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Died for Me
"It seems I have lost touch with all that made me seem real
Im losing everything and all that I used to feel Feel,meant more,but now means nothing When I look and see of all You've done for me Your the only thing I want,the only thing I need To be alive again,to be freed Flashbacks of that sorrowfull day When You gave it all away All away for me, even though I did'nt deserve a thing But You still died for me Just over the horrizon you can see the sun fade The world goes silent and everythings taken away Thunder shatters the silence with a violent shake How many times will it take before we brake? We can pretend we didnt hammer the nails into His hands We can pretend we didnt do it,but what happends in the end? Flashbacks of such a tragic day When You gave it all away All away for me even though I cursed You But in the end You knew You were the only hope for mankind That we were all walking blind But I love you now I cant even remember why or how Why I cused You or how I became so corrupt But now Im ending that and never giving up Visions of a time when I am Yours and You are mine There is no time here,we left it behind Left it behind, You carry me and take away my fears Here, where we call it Home, no more sorrow,no more tears." Im gonna send this in the newsletter too along with some other stuff Im working on,but I got tired of not seeing anything of mine here,so yea.
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03-02-2004, 09:29 PM | #2 |
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we cant pretend we didnt hammer the nails into his hands......Yes we did ( like that part....seeks i was getting tired of not seeing nothing of yours too..I really Like this one To bad my printer is broke im sure if was something i didnt like it would work
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03-02-2004, 10:17 PM | #3 |
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That's excellent! You're a good writer!
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03-03-2004, 01:06 PM | #4 |
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Hahahaha,what are you saying? I write stuff you dont like somtimes??? hehe,just kidding.
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That is really sweet, MrSeeker! Excellent job.
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Very good Kevin
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Thanks!
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