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Old 02-13-2004, 01:28 AM   #1
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Crimson Fate

She lies awake waiting for someone to take
With legs wide open for any man that comes along
She'll say yes to any man so really it isnt rape
If you force her down and beat her till she bleeds
Its really what she wants from you
She feels that she's happy as long as she fulfill's other's needs
Atleast thats whats been forced into her head,
Ever since her father left and her mother was found dead
Now she lives on the streets in shame,without a home and without a name
She lives all alone with the bitter pain of knowing that her life might never change
Life might always be like this, trading a buck for a priceless kiss
It hurts me to see this unfold, maybe for a moment I could try to be bold
And help out this girl that means so much to me, instead I just left her in that situation that was so ugly
What kind of freind am I to just pass you by
as some guy severly beats you and you begin to cry?

The moment I knew was coming has finally come
A guy walked up to her and jabbed her with his gun
He took off his clothes and told her to begin
Took her pantys off to feel himself with in
Her makeup goes down her cheek for the man had to take a peak
Inside her body inside her soul, took the one thing that made her whole
He had his fun,but wanted more then to rape a poor girl
and leave her on the floor
He beat her untill she bled from the face
Shot her with his gun then carried her to her final resting place
She lay dead in a ditch with blood on the ground,
in a puddle of crimson and doesnt make a sound

Days passed by and I hate myself again
For knowing that I could have saved the life of my once good friend

Saved her from the beating and saved her from the end.


Thanks to Kim(Torn Signs) for the title!
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Old 02-14-2004, 10:25 PM   #2
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Aww good one}
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Old 02-17-2004, 01:44 AM   #4
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wow thats differnt...i like that
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Is that what you call a getaway?
Tell me what you got away with
B/c i've seen more spine in jellyfish
and ive seen more guts on 11 year old kids.
Have another drink and drive yourself home
I hope theres ice on all the roads
and think of me when you forget your seatbelt
and again when your head goes through the windshield.
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