Wishes

Rulesdontapply · 11-30-2004, 03:23 PM

This is a song im working on, opinions would b great. thanks!

I wish you’d never known me
I wish id never knew
The times we shared were only
Our own points of view
Cuz you never needed me
And I always wanted you
Now the only thing to do
Is turn and walk away
(And it is killing me!)

Turn and walk away from me
Burn away the thoughts of me
But leave me the remains
The parts you didn’t like
And ill wash away the stains
Ill make me whole again
But until then

I wish you’d never known me
I wish id never knew
The times we shared were only
Our own points of view
Cuz you never needed me
And I always wanted you
Now the only thing to do
Is turn and walk away
(And it is killing me!)

You had no use for the truth
And I would not stand to lose
You had to choose
And you showed me
Who will really lose
And I, oh I

I wish you’d never known me
I wish id never knew
The times we shared were only
Our own points of view
Cuz you never needed me
And I always wanted you
Now the only thing to do
Is turn and walk away
(And it is killing me!)

creedsister · 11-30-2004, 08:36 PM

Good One, sometimes it feels like that, in stuff ROCK ON

HR2004 · 11-30-2004, 10:38 PM

that was good!

Ann Allusion · 12-01-2004, 07:14 PM

will make a good song...

11-30-2004, 03:23 PM	#1
Rulesdontapply USER INFO » Status: Unspoken Posts: 48 Joined: May 2004 Currently: Offline	Wishes This is a song im working on, opinions would b great. thanks! I wish you’d never known me I wish id never knew The times we shared were only Our own points of view Cuz you never needed me And I always wanted you Now the only thing to do Is turn and walk away (And it is killing me!) Turn and walk away from me Burn away the thoughts of me But leave me the remains The parts you didn’t like And ill wash away the stains Ill make me whole again But until then I wish you’d never known me I wish id never knew The times we shared were only Our own points of view Cuz you never needed me And I always wanted you Now the only thing to do Is turn and walk away (And it is killing me!) You had no use for the truth And I would not stand to lose You had to choose And you showed me Who will really lose And I, oh I I wish you’d never known me I wish id never knew The times we shared were only Our own points of view Cuz you never needed me And I always wanted you Now the only thing to do Is turn and walk away (And it is killing me!)

11-30-2004, 08:36 PM	#2
creedsister USER INFO » Status: Tree of Wisdom Posts: 8,290 Joined: Oct 2003 Currently: Offline	Good One, sometimes it feels like that, in stuff ROCK ON __________________ Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything

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HR2004 USER INFO » Status: Faceless Fan Posts: 455 Joined: Jun 2004 Currently: Offline	that was good!

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Ann Allusion USER INFO » Status: INK'ed Posts: 912 Joined: Jan 2003 Currently: Offline	will make a good song...

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