Writer's Block

njcreedite · 01-07-2004, 10:24 PM

I tried to write but no use
as I think and think
Perhaps it would help if I
drank a small drink

So the drink that I drank
was a drink that was pink
But so much did I drink
that now I can't think

I'd thank the drink maker
of the drink that I drank
But I think that the drink
has now maken me drunk

So no more shall I write
I can't think and I stink
Of the drink that I drank
that was some ugly pink

njcreedite · 01-07-2004, 10:26 PM

Okay..I know it's silly. Souldancer sent me some Dr. Suess stuff and ever since his verses have been flowing in my head. Okay..so The Garden of Pain was a bit dark..and now I'm writing silly verse about drinking (which I do very little of..). You folks must think I'm a bit psycho.

Dogstar · 01-07-2004, 10:30 PM

LMFAO. That is terrific, njcreedite!!!

creedsister · 01-07-2004, 11:03 PM

All i can say you must have been drunk

TeriB19 · 01-07-2004, 11:20 PM

Linda, I'm LMAO, that was hysterical. I LOVED it!!! Very Suessical and very very good.

hide · 01-07-2004, 11:36 PM

that was good certainly different to any previous dark peices, gave me a laugh!

Aimee · 01-08-2004, 02:05 PM

I was hoping by the title that this would be a funny one.... it is!
Girl, can you dedicate that poem to me?

njcreedite · 01-08-2004, 09:03 PM

Quote: (Originally Posted by Aimee) I was hoping by the title that this would be a funny one.... it is!
Girl, can you dedicate that poem to me?

Consider it yours!

njcreedite · 01-08-2004, 09:07 PM

Quote: (Originally Posted by creedsister) All i can say you must have been drunk

Nope...just bored. I was sitting outside of my daughter's school waiting for her to return from her swim meet....They ran late, got stuck in traffic etc..so I waited for her and hour and a half. Plus it takes me an hour and a half each way to get to the dopey place. BOREDOM does strange things to people. I was reading a book and this dopey verse got in my head...so I took out my pad and out it came, sounding inane, but truely insane. It came into my brain like a quick summer rain...UGH!!!!!! I can't stop!

Dogstar · 01-08-2004, 09:11 PM

LMFAO!!! You're having such fun with this, hehehe.

SCOTTSMYMAN · 01-09-2004, 09:53 AM

I loved it Linda and I just really needed to laugh right now ! Thank you!

njcreedite · 01-09-2004, 10:51 PM

Quote: (Originally Posted by SCOTTSMYMAN)

I loved it Linda and I just really needed to laugh right now ! Thank you!

Hey, I aim to please

it's like climbing up trees
so fun it seems to be
climbing up trees
whenever you please

oh God...some one stop me!!!!

Sheila63 · 01-10-2004, 07:29 PM

Linda, I think it's great. I LOVE it too.

Torn Signs · 01-13-2004, 05:25 PM

You deserve an A+ for being able to revert from serious and dark to this awesome hilarious poem!

njcreedite · 01-14-2004, 07:27 PM

Quote: (Originally Posted by Torn Signs) You deserve an A+ for being able to revert from serious and dark to this awesome hilarious poem!

It's called...multiple personalities....

Ahhhh, wonder which poem depicts the real me?
I'll never tell.

01-07-2004, 10:24 PM	#1
njcreedite USER INFO » Status: INK'ed Posts: 808 Joined: Jan 2003 Currently: Offline	Writer's Block I tried to write but no use as I think and think Perhaps it would help if I drank a small drink So the drink that I drank was a drink that was pink But so much did I drink that now I can't think I'd thank the drink maker of the drink that I drank But I think that the drink has now maken me drunk So no more shall I write I can't think and I stink Of the drink that I drank that was some ugly pink __________________ eddie vedder quote:: We were both singers. Chris Cornell The first time we played he came to this little club and he told me that it was really good and he was thankful that I was there and that I was who I was, or something really nice, but the whole time he was saying this, he didn't realize but he was standing under a black light, and his teeth were glowing and his eyes were glowing. I remember it as my first conversation with Satan ..."

01-07-2004, 10:26 PM	#2
njcreedite USER INFO » Status: INK'ed Posts: 808 Joined: Jan 2003 Currently: Offline	Okay..I know it's silly. Souldancer sent me some Dr. Suess stuff and ever since his verses have been flowing in my head. Okay..so The Garden of Pain was a bit dark..and now I'm writing silly verse about drinking (which I do very little of..). You folks must think I'm a bit psycho. __________________ eddie vedder quote:: We were both singers. Chris Cornell The first time we played he came to this little club and he told me that it was really good and he was thankful that I was there and that I was who I was, or something really nice, but the whole time he was saying this, he didn't realize but he was standing under a black light, and his teeth were glowing and his eyes were glowing. I remember it as my first conversation with Satan ..."

01-07-2004, 10:30 PM	#3
Dogstar Forum Diplomat USER INFO » Status: Young Grown Old Posts: 21,345 Joined: Sep 2002 Currently: Offline	LMFAO. That is terrific, njcreedite!!! __________________ Silly monkeys give them thumbs they make a club and beat their brother down. How they survive so misguided is a mystery.

01-07-2004, 11:03 PM	#4
creedsister USER INFO » Status: Tree of Wisdom Posts: 8,290 Joined: Oct 2003 Currently: Offline	All i can say you must have been drunk __________________ Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything

01-07-2004, 11:20 PM	#5
TeriB19 Forum Diplomat USER INFO » Status: Saving Grace Posts: 12,439 Joined: Sep 2002 Currently: Offline	Linda, I'm LMAO, that was hysterical. I LOVED it!!! Very Suessical and very very good. __________________ MK: We're never gonna have the Super Bowl of Scott Stapp vs. Myles Kennedy in a sing-off - it's ridiculous. SP: Actually, we are setting that up. MT: It was in your contract when you signed up with us.

01-07-2004, 11:36 PM	#6
hide USER INFO » Status: INK'ed Posts: 919 Joined: Feb 2003 Currently: Offline	that was good certainly different to any previous dark peices, gave me a laugh! __________________ come on all you PJ loving Creeders come and look and also post at the busiest and funniest board around (excluding here of course LOL) http://forums.pearljam.com

01-08-2004, 02:05 PM	#7
Aimee USER INFO » Status: INK'ed Posts: 822 Joined: Sep 2002 Currently: Offline	I was hoping by the title that this would be a funny one.... it is! Girl, can you dedicate that poem to me? __________________ The capacity for passion is both cruel and divine. George Sand - 1834

01-08-2004, 09:03 PM	#8
njcreedite USER INFO » Status: INK'ed Posts: 808 Joined: Jan 2003 Currently: Offline	Quote: (Originally Posted by Aimee) I was hoping by the title that this would be a funny one.... it is! Girl, can you dedicate that poem to me? Consider it yours! __________________ eddie vedder quote:: We were both singers. Chris Cornell The first time we played he came to this little club and he told me that it was really good and he was thankful that I was there and that I was who I was, or something really nice, but the whole time he was saying this, he didn't realize but he was standing under a black light, and his teeth were glowing and his eyes were glowing. I remember it as my first conversation with Satan ..."

01-08-2004, 09:07 PM	#9
njcreedite USER INFO » Status: INK'ed Posts: 808 Joined: Jan 2003 Currently: Offline	Quote: (Originally Posted by creedsister) All i can say you must have been drunk Nope...just bored. I was sitting outside of my daughter's school waiting for her to return from her swim meet....They ran late, got stuck in traffic etc..so I waited for her and hour and a half. Plus it takes me an hour and a half each way to get to the dopey place. BOREDOM does strange things to people. I was reading a book and this dopey verse got in my head...so I took out my pad and out it came, sounding inane, but truely insane. It came into my brain like a quick summer rain...UGH!!!!!! I can't stop! __________________ eddie vedder quote:: We were both singers. Chris Cornell The first time we played he came to this little club and he told me that it was really good and he was thankful that I was there and that I was who I was, or something really nice, but the whole time he was saying this, he didn't realize but he was standing under a black light, and his teeth were glowing and his eyes were glowing. I remember it as my first conversation with Satan ..."

01-08-2004, 09:11 PM	#10
Dogstar Forum Diplomat USER INFO » Status: Young Grown Old Posts: 21,345 Joined: Sep 2002 Currently: Offline	LMFAO!!! You're having such fun with this, hehehe. __________________ Silly monkeys give them thumbs they make a club and beat their brother down. How they survive so misguided is a mystery.

01-09-2004, 10:51 PM	#12
njcreedite USER INFO » Status: INK'ed Posts: 808 Joined: Jan 2003 Currently: Offline	Quote: (Originally Posted by SCOTTSMYMAN) I loved it Linda and I just really needed to laugh right now ! Thank you! Hey, I aim to please it's like climbing up trees so fun it seems to be climbing up trees whenever you please oh God...some one stop me!!!! __________________ eddie vedder quote:: We were both singers. Chris Cornell The first time we played he came to this little club and he told me that it was really good and he was thankful that I was there and that I was who I was, or something really nice, but the whole time he was saying this, he didn't realize but he was standing under a black light, and his teeth were glowing and his eyes were glowing. I remember it as my first conversation with Satan ..."

01-10-2004, 07:29 PM	#13
Sheila63 USER INFO » Status: Opened My Eyes Posts: 5,748 Joined: Dec 2002 Currently: Offline	Linda, I think it's great. I LOVE it too. __________________ I was selfish, but you still loved me You gave the greatest gift of all And you set me free Relearn Love

01-14-2004, 07:27 PM	#15
njcreedite USER INFO » Status: INK'ed Posts: 808 Joined: Jan 2003 Currently: Offline	Quote: (Originally Posted by Torn Signs) You deserve an A+ for being able to revert from serious and dark to this awesome hilarious poem! It's called...multiple personalities.... Ahhhh, wonder which poem depicts the real me? I'll never tell. __________________ eddie vedder quote:: We were both singers. Chris Cornell The first time we played he came to this little club and he told me that it was really good and he was thankful that I was there and that I was who I was, or something really nice, but the whole time he was saying this, he didn't realize but he was standing under a black light, and his teeth were glowing and his eyes were glowing. I remember it as my first conversation with Satan ..."

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