I am writing lyrics for my band - plz tell me what you think

[adparaiki]

Hi. I am the guitarist and singer in my band and just would really like to have opinions of some lyrics I have written. Note: They are not all complete yet

Someone Else. (c) Adam Parker 24/10/08

Verse 1:
Looking into the mirror I see this unfamiliar face
Starring back at me, have I changed, is this me

Pre-Chorus
If I could take back what Ive done wrong
If All my demons would be gone.

Chorus
I will feel free, I will belong Here
Someone Else I wont be,
This Stranger staring back at me.

Verse 2:
Looking into this mirros I see that I am this stranger
Starring back at me, I have changed, this is me


Room to Breathe (c) Adam Parker 24/10/08

Verse 1:
Your eyes follow me ,accross the room, I can't breathe
You're watching at my every move, you're smothering me
Judging, watching, waiting, ready to control
Do you think i've no mind of my own.

Chrous:
You need to let me go,
Because I need room to Breathe
And i'll make up my own mind
I'll make my own wrongs and rights

Bridge:
All I ever wanted is you to believe in me
I need room to breathe

[adparaiki]

Mental Scars (C) Adam Parker 24/10/08

Tormented to the brink
you're beyond breaking down
pain is what you've found
unable to let go is how you feel
frustrations taken you, so you drop and kneel



Mental scars of the past
make you feel like giving up (but don't give up)
Any you don't know even if they will ever let you go

[nagpo]

they're okay.

[TrulyAmazing]

those are all a beautiful blitz they ok