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[nagpo]

Who's gonna save me
When you leave, baby

Who's going to breath
Into me, wandering

Cause these loving feelings
Do not fade, easily

The Moon's coverd
By clouds and storms at sea

I feel like an ocean of motion
Why can't I just relax?

It's windy

I'm a rod
With no electricity
A fire
Without any flames

And why can't you watch my back?

They tell me life's a rollercoaster
With it's ups and downs
Oh I think they're lying
Cause I've always worn a frown

And time is not enough, no
Lies aren't sweet enough, no

At times I am willing
To do my best
But who am I kidding?
I'll never best the rest
So why can't you be here?
Pitying the pest

The sun won't rise
Not this very night
But I feel the flames,
Oh I feel the flames
Rise

Who's going to breath
Into me, wandering

[TrulyAmazing]

And time is not enough, lies aren,t sweet enough, those lines are awsome,loved the entire piece very deep very emotional very bold

[nagpo]

thank you so much

[TrulyAmazing]

your welcome

[Dogstar]

Great job. I especially liked these lines:

I feel like an ocean of motion
Why can't I just relax?

That says a lot.

[nagpo]

thanks a ton man.

[TrulyAmazing]

Quote: (Originally Posted by nagpo)

thanks a ton man.

that always happens a lot kerri Has Got That Amazon Appeal I Know Shes A really cool chicky nagpo