++ Alter Bridge - Fortress ++ PreOrder NOW!!  
Go Back   CreedFeed Community > Community Central > Waxing Poetica
Today's Posts «

Post Reply
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread
Old 07-20-2005, 11:54 PM   #1
HR2004
USER INFO »
Status: Faceless Fan
Posts: 455
Joined: Jun 2004
Currently: Offline
Not sure

Laying there side by side...
With our hands intwined...
Having this great love...
That never dies...
For it is for real...
And nothing can steal...
The happiness it gives...
The passion rising...
The urge unbearable...
All my strength is not enough to contain...
All this strain...
My affection...
Endless...
The kisses...
continious...
The Moment...
Waiting...
The touches...
Welcoming...
The warmth...
Inviting..
No way..
To stray...
Calling me...
Closer...
Making me go...
Where Ive always been afraid...
But in your arms...
I have no fears...
I could fly with you by my side...
So much happening all around no way...
To stop...
No words to utter...
Just gazing...
We know whats happening...
The passion burns...
But the place it takes us...
Peaceful and great...


I dont know what to call this one help me out I think its kinda everywhere!Idk
__________________
Dancing around...
With joy found...
The music in my head loud...
Joyful noises sound...
Happiness surrounds...
Reply With Quote
Old 07-21-2005, 01:12 AM   #2
creedsister
creedsister's Avatar
USER INFO »
Status: Tree of Wisdom
Posts: 8,290
Joined: Oct 2003
Currently: Offline
i was really sure that was beautiful ... i dont know about a title
__________________
Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
Reply With Quote
Old 07-22-2005, 04:58 AM   #3
Ann Allusion
USER INFO »
Status: INK'ed
Posts: 912
Joined: Jan 2003
Currently: Offline
quite passionate...beautiful written....

how 'bout calling it...."Loving You"...just kind of how it struck me when i read it...just a thought...
__________________

In sleep he sang to me, in dreams he came
That voice which calls to me and speaks my name
And do I dream again, for now I find
The phantom of the opera is there...inside my mind

Christine/ Phantom Of The Opera


Abondon thought and let the dream decend....
Point of No Return/Phantom Of The Opera


You will forever remain the music
And I…the song you sing
Reply With Quote
Old 07-22-2005, 02:01 PM   #4
creedsister
creedsister's Avatar
USER INFO »
Status: Tree of Wisdom
Posts: 8,290
Joined: Oct 2003
Currently: Offline
yes Haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa that would be a good one too
__________________
Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
Reply With Quote
Post Reply


Currently Active Users Viewing This Thread: 1 (0 members and 1 guests)
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Forum Jump


All times are GMT -4. The time now is 11:01 AM.

Powered by vBulletin Version 3.5.2
Copyright ©2000 - 2019, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
Copyright © 2004 Steve Caponetto. All Rights Reserved.