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Old 06-12-2005, 04:16 PM   #1
Ann Allusion
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Sword Play

Sword Play

Your sword is showing it’s sting
Like the scorpions tail
Dripping "blood" with every thrust
To this unprotected heart…
Carrying promises of sweetness
In it’s cold steel blade
Promises that nary life nor death
Can fulfill…only love
Past the physical into the realm of spirit
Beyond this earthly plane
Strike and strike again….
Wearing your opponent thin
You know she is yours and will be
To the end…

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In sleep he sang to me, in dreams he came
That voice which calls to me and speaks my name
And do I dream again, for now I find
The phantom of the opera is there...inside my mind

Christine/ Phantom Of The Opera


Abondon thought and let the dream decend....
Point of No Return/Phantom Of The Opera


You will forever remain the music
And I…the song you sing
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Old 06-12-2005, 10:55 PM   #2
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That Was one of you,re truly amazing poems
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 06-13-2005, 12:35 AM   #3
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that was a great visual!Liked it!
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Dancing around...
With joy found...
The music in my head loud...
Joyful noises sound...
Happiness surrounds...
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Old 06-13-2005, 03:12 PM   #4
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thank you both...glad you liked it... ...
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In sleep he sang to me, in dreams he came
That voice which calls to me and speaks my name
And do I dream again, for now I find
The phantom of the opera is there...inside my mind

Christine/ Phantom Of The Opera


Abondon thought and let the dream decend....
Point of No Return/Phantom Of The Opera


You will forever remain the music
And I…the song you sing
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Old 06-13-2005, 03:43 PM   #5
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Wow, I love the poem too, very deep.
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Old 08-24-2005, 11:10 PM   #6
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yes indeed it was one Susans Greats
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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