Kill the Living

[MrSeeker]

"The words seem to haunt me in the night
Thats the time the darkness comes to disolve the light
The whispers scream into my ear
They tell of things I should not hear
Those haunting words in my head
They tell me all of you should be dead

Kill the living
Bury the dead
Kill your parents is what I said

Im told to kill the living and bury the dead
But I dont think I want to listen to what they said
I'll make mockery of this lonely place
I'll shut you up and shove it in your face
For now I'll listen to these voices
Hopefully later on I'll make some better choices

Kill th living
Bury the dead
Kill your parents is what I said

Kill,kill,kill!!!! Bleed,bleed bleed!!! Die,die,die!!!!

Thats right,
Kill the living!!! (The living have only pulled you down)
Bleed for me!!! (Cut yourselves wide open,I love to hear that sound)
Die for me!!! (In Hell you will be crowned)

Bleed for me,ye hopeless and depressed
I want to take advantage of you and leave you in this mess
See,I have some tricks up my sleave's
Im gonna lie to you and then Im going to leave
See,you have just been fooled
I just made a mockery out of you!!!

That is the brutal truth of what I say
I'll sell you nothing and then get my pay
I'll rape your lonely little minds
I'll lead the way then you can get in line


Kill the voices in your head
Dont listen to the lies they've all said
They are only there to rape your mind
To take your soul and leave the rest behind"

I just wrote this. Instead of just posting and saying you like it. Tell me what you think this song is saying, I want to know if you get out of it what i wanted you to...this should be interesting to see what you guys/girls come up with. Thanks

[Dogstar]

Ok, I'm probably way off, but here's my take. It sounds as if the subject of the poem is trying to exorcise the pain from something awful that happened to him or her, something that was done to him or her by someone he or she trusted.

[MrSeeker]

Thanks,That was a good take on it.
What does everyone else think?

[creedsister]

ohoh i will tell you what i think ive heard voices like that before}}these Are suicide voices from the pitts of hell its great mrseeker~its got an great meaning and sooo true]] those haunting words in my head tell me i should be dead}} I Loved that line truly Another Great One mrseeker It Rocked

[MrSeeker]

Thanks, that is another good take on that!
Anyone else?

[JulieCitySlicker]

The first thing that came to mind for me after reading this is possible struggle with suicide or about something horrible that happened to someone Very deep and emotional/ heartfelt! I really liked it Kevin

[MrSeeker]

Yet again,another good take on it!
Thanks alot Julie,I am glad you liked it

[Aimee]

Only constructive criticism here right? I didn't like this one. Maybe it's because I cannot relate to the words, but the bloody disregard for human life and emotion makes this a peice of work I cannot enjoy, regardless of how well the words fit together or what they are trying to convey. I like most of your dark stuff though, so don't take any offence to my

[MrSeeker]

Thank you for your honesty,I love hearing about the good and the bad. So thank you.
Oh and if you would read deeper into the lyrics,you will get the awesome message behind it. The last paragraph sums it up pretty well...Im sorry you dont like it though

[creedsister]

Quote: (Originally Posted by MrSeeker)

Thank you for your honesty,I love hearing about the good and the bad. So thank you.
Oh and if you would read deeper into the lyrics,you will get the awesome message behind it. The last paragraph sums it up pretty well...Im sorry you dont like it though

well i like it seeks people just dont like the morbid stuff i guess but i for one love it and dont avoid these issues the ending was great i like the dark stuff B/c i know that somehow it can be brought in to the light i guess i can explain what im trying to say but oh well nice poem as always

[MrSeeker]

Yea, we live in a dark world so I write dark stuff. Im not gonna write about happy things because most of that stuff isnt what is really going on in this dark world. Im just trying to connect with people,show them that their not alone and show them there is light at the end of this cold,dark tunnel.

[creedsister]

i know i like what you do ya know}}i know that if i would have read something like that at one time in my life it would got me through yet another day}}it was killer i liked it}the world is a cold place and i will can do is just sorta do what we can the best we can the way we know how to do it~~im on a ramble Again Im silent now!!!!

[Aimee]

Quote: (Originally Posted by MrSeeker)

Thank you for your honesty,I love hearing about the good and the bad. So thank you.
Oh and if you would read deeper into the lyrics,you will get the awesome message behind it. The last paragraph sums it up pretty well...Im sorry you dont like it though

Aww, don't sweat it, I like everything else, it's probably just where I am at this point in my head right now. Another day, I might read it and go wow that's friggin awesome! I do think you're very talented and I don't think you should change your style at all.

[MrSeeker]

OK
Thanks you for thinking Im talented,hehe.
Rock on!

[SCTMM's hubby]

After reading that I want to listen to some Slayer And thrash. That was VERY VERY dark AND I LOVED IT.