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09-02-2004, 09:17 PM | #1 |
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(Arms) of Cold and of Pain
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Song I wrote....the guitar to it is good. (Arms) of Cold and of Pain ©2004 (Intro, soft guitar) (verse 1, soft guitar playing and sung) I look into your eyes, so lovely They pierce through me and my heart I feel your loving arms surround me Thats when I break apart I see that beautiful smile on your face As you slowly go drifting by I hear the words that fall short of this place Feeling myself panic as I (slowly) die (bridge 1, heavy guitar and screamed) I plunge into arms so cold!!! So scared, yet so bold!!! (verse 2 heavy guitar and screamed) Giving ones heart away Cherishing those eyes that say You were never strong enough To do what you needed to Still faithfully hoping to see you (bridge 1, heavy guitar) (continue verse 2) Again one day, I'll see your face In this place of pain and haste Wishing for one more taste Of pleasure inside the pain (chorus/bridge 2, soft guitar and sung) I just want to see your face again Before I rise to meet my end Because your face is just an image in my mind I want to touch you before we leave this all behind (chorus/bridge 2, heavy guitar and screamed) I just want to see your face again!!! Before I rise and meet my end!!! Because your face is just an image in my head!!! I want to touch you before I'm dead!!!
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09-02-2004, 11:11 PM | #2 |
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i liked it alot
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Thank you much....Me and Kim just wrote something,but didnt finish it,yay! She rocks so hard.
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09-03-2004, 12:51 AM | #4 |
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Coooooooooooooooooooooool Kim Rulessssssssssssss
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liked the lyrics, Mr. Seeker...what style of music are the lyrics set to...?
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Thanks....Its set to like...soft guitar for the beginning, it kind of reminds me of hoobastank-The Reason, and then when It says "Into arms so cold" ,it starts screaming with heavy guitar. Hard to explain, hehehe.
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Man You can almost feel it
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simply awesome!!!
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Thank you
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your welcomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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That was good Kevin
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Thank you much Julie
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