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Old 06-24-2005, 08:55 PM   #1
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Forever's Face

Forever’s Face

I’ve looked on the face of forever
When asked what did I see...
A face that holds such wonder
Staring back at me

Behind deep eyes was something
That just couldn’t hide
Tossed in a forgotten corner
Wrapped tightly up inside

A soul asked, please save me
Pleading without words
With tender heart so fragile
It’s beat’s barely heard

Afraid to let another close
Fearing they may find
The secrets that are hiding
That won’t be left behind

Unable to share the burden
Fearing thoughts of love
Hard to understand
What it is you’re so afraid of

Seeking what is wanted most
While holding it at bay
This charade called hide and seek
Is a dangerous game to play

The world knows only confidence
As well they should see
When living on the razor’s edge
Betw’en realities

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In sleep he sang to me, in dreams he came
That voice which calls to me and speaks my name
And do I dream again, for now I find
The phantom of the opera is there...inside my mind

Christine/ Phantom Of The Opera


Abondon thought and let the dream decend....
Point of No Return/Phantom Of The Opera


You will forever remain the music
And I…the song you sing
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Old 06-25-2005, 12:07 AM   #2
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Amazing piece but i loved these lines..Pleading without words with tender heart so fragile its beat is bearly heared..Afraid to let another close fearing they may the secrets they are hiding that wont be left behind ...Unable to share the burden fearing thoughts of Love Hard to Understand What your so Afraid... The World Only Knows Confindence as well they should see when living on the razor edge between Realties
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 06-25-2005, 07:27 AM   #3
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thank you, cs...
glad you enjoyed reading it...
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In sleep he sang to me, in dreams he came
That voice which calls to me and speaks my name
And do I dream again, for now I find
The phantom of the opera is there...inside my mind

Christine/ Phantom Of The Opera


Abondon thought and let the dream decend....
Point of No Return/Phantom Of The Opera


You will forever remain the music
And I…the song you sing
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