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Old 10-06-2007, 01:20 PM   #1
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To You

long ago You visited my heart
on a flowerfield
like a breath of wind
I could feel Your timeless whisper
and Your love touched me
with every sunbeam

back then everything was so easy
seeing wrong and right in colors
of Your Merciful beeing
refinement
show me the path of return to you
that would make my dreams come true

in a whirlwind of tragedy
in a life of a refugee
innocence is quickly bruised
and still now
when I thought I'd know it all
I return to being a child

in this modern world
that leaves shame on the ground
chastity is a sin
please forgive me
'cause I wasn't strong enough
I let this world win

this path that lead me to be
blinded by demons
You followed me
You whispered Your Love
through every day of fear
You dried my tears

oh so many times
I cried myself to sleep
I died me, to survive
so now, with eyes wide open
I ask You to take me back
into the place of Your mercy

in this short life
there's nothing more valuable than faith
and I'll live for it, I'll die for it
make me a rose and not a thorn
I'll follow You, in love more than ever
to Your Light, I surrender
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Old 10-09-2007, 08:00 PM   #2
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Crystal

misseeker from your wrting styles this one was perfect IN ELOBARATING in covered a lot of ground from the dimsion style of your potery which is liking i think in a lot of our newer potery very furfilling thats what i love about this one and your a great writer it takes us my sissy to pull off long master piecies like this haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa long anthoms put to paper now tell me girlfriend did you write this by getting inspired with some geroge lucas All Was Perfect But These Lines Stuck Out IN A WHIRLWIND OF TRAGDEY IN A LIFE OF REFUGE awsome INNOCENCE IS QUICKLY BRUISED AND STILL NOW WHEN I THOUGHT I,D KNOW IT ALL I RETURN TO BEING A CHILD, from certian stanzas it reminds me of whitney houstons did,nt we almost have it all A MOMEANT IN THE SOUL CAN LAST FOREVER its perfect and thanks for sharing your stuff Old girl
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Old 10-11-2007, 08:40 AM   #3
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Re: To You

Thanks HeavensOnFire. You're sooo sweet!
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Old 10-12-2007, 07:49 PM   #4
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Re: To You

Quote: (Originally Posted by MissSeeker) Thanks HeavensOnFire. You're sooo sweet!
HAAAAAAAAAAAAAA sweet if ya say so i,ll buy it and your very much welcome
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