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10-06-2007, 01:20 PM | #1 |
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To You
long ago You visited my heart
on a flowerfield like a breath of wind I could feel Your timeless whisper and Your love touched me with every sunbeam back then everything was so easy seeing wrong and right in colors of Your Merciful beeing refinement show me the path of return to you that would make my dreams come true in a whirlwind of tragedy in a life of a refugee innocence is quickly bruised and still now when I thought I'd know it all I return to being a child in this modern world that leaves shame on the ground chastity is a sin please forgive me 'cause I wasn't strong enough I let this world win this path that lead me to be blinded by demons You followed me You whispered Your Love through every day of fear You dried my tears oh so many times I cried myself to sleep I died me, to survive so now, with eyes wide open I ask You to take me back into the place of Your mercy in this short life there's nothing more valuable than faith and I'll live for it, I'll die for it make me a rose and not a thorn I'll follow You, in love more than ever to Your Light, I surrender
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10-09-2007, 08:00 PM | #2 |
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misseeker from your wrting styles this one was perfect IN ELOBARATING in covered a lot of ground from the dimsion style of your potery which is liking i think in a lot of our newer potery very furfilling thats what i love about this one and your a great writer it takes us my sissy to pull off long master piecies like this haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa long anthoms put to paper now tell me girlfriend did you write this by getting inspired with some geroge lucas All Was Perfect But These Lines Stuck Out IN A WHIRLWIND OF TRAGDEY IN A LIFE OF REFUGE awsome INNOCENCE IS QUICKLY BRUISED AND STILL NOW WHEN I THOUGHT I,D KNOW IT ALL I RETURN TO BEING A CHILD, from certian stanzas it reminds me of whitney houstons did,nt we almost have it all A MOMEANT IN THE SOUL CAN LAST FOREVER its perfect and thanks for sharing your stuff Old girl
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When NO One Else Can Understand Me When Everything I Do Is Wrong You Give Hope And Consolation You Give Me Strength To Carry On, And Your Always There To Lend A Hand In Everything I Do That The Wonder The WONDER Of You And When You Smile The World Is Brighter YOU Touch My Hand And Im Queen Your KISS To Me Is Worth A Fourtune Your Love For Me Is Everything I,ll Guess I,ll Never Know The Reason Why You Love As You Do Thats Just The Wonder The Wonder Of You |
10-11-2007, 08:40 AM | #3 |
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Re: To You
Thanks HeavensOnFire. You're sooo sweet!
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10-12-2007, 07:49 PM | #4 |
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HAAAAAAAAAAAAAA sweet if ya say so i,ll buy it and your very much welcome
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When NO One Else Can Understand Me When Everything I Do Is Wrong You Give Hope And Consolation You Give Me Strength To Carry On, And Your Always There To Lend A Hand In Everything I Do That The Wonder The WONDER Of You And When You Smile The World Is Brighter YOU Touch My Hand And Im Queen Your KISS To Me Is Worth A Fourtune Your Love For Me Is Everything I,ll Guess I,ll Never Know The Reason Why You Love As You Do Thats Just The Wonder The Wonder Of You |
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