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05-14-2010, 01:15 PM | #1 |
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lyrics for a song I wrote
I'm Adam, 23, I am a singer and guitarist in a band. Plz tell me what you think of the lyircs to this song so far. it's called room to breathe
Verse 1 - Your eyes follow me, Please let me be I can't breathe You're watching at my every move Smothering me, Judging watching waiting ready to control Do you think i've no mind of my own Chorus- You need to let me go, because I need room to breathe And i'll make up my own mind I'll make my own wrongs and wrights Bridge - All I ever wanted is you to believe me, I need room to breathe (x2)
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Re: lyrics for a song I wrote
hey man i did,nt read, this piece, i like it, sorta got a dark groove to, reminds, me of the polices, that big 80,s hit from cats eyes, where they gave the chick shock thearpy to quit smoking, every breathe you take....
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kwl thanks for your comments. I have recorded a live version of the song. here: http://www.totallyunsigned.co.uk/members/1902/index.php it's the second song down
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