The fantasy vault! - Page 66

Sheila63 · 07-28-2003, 12:50 PM

Great job, Kris!!!

I'm proud of you too. Although I understand that it's a totally different form of creative writing, I was kind of nervous about posting my first poem in the Creative forum so I can relate to that feeling. I really enjoyed it and it was a wonderful way to start of the week.

Teri, won't you at least share one that's in your head with us?

DangerousDan85 · 07-29-2003, 02:48 PM

Quote: Originally posted by SCOTTSMYMAN
<b>Ok I'm gonna be brave. I don't know how good this will be it's me first time but here it goes:

I'm just getting off a plane at the Maui airport in Hawaii. As I'm going to pick up my bags I run into this guy. Looking up my heart starts to flutter as I'm looking into the eyes of Scott Stapp. He realizes immediately that I know who he is and puts his hand up to mouth and shakes his head. He says "Please don't say anything and I'll take you out to dinner!" Of course me pass up an opportunity like that NO WAY! So, he helps me get my bags and we drive to his hotel. He of course has the whole top floor to himself. He says I can change in his room for dinner so I find the best dress I can find shower and get dressed. We have the most beautiful view at dinner. We are right on the beach. We talk and get to know each other a little bit. After dinner we walk along the beach joking and just having a great time. He asks me what one of my favorite songs is. I tell him "To Whom it May Concern" He starts to sing the chorus to me as he brushes my hair away from my eyes. Staring straight into my eyes I began to shake. Before I can say anything he takes my face in his hands a ever so softly kisses me on the lips. Of course I'm taken back by this. He asks if that was ok. "Yes, that was wonderful!' He does it again but this time he kisses me harder and my knees start to buckle. He feels this and asks if I want to go back to his room. So, we go back, he has flowers everywhere and candles are burning next to a bath full of bubbles. We of course get in the tub and make love all night long!!! I wake to a rose on my pillow with a note that says "Can't wait to see you again tonight" Love - Scott.

Ok , how was that! I'm soo :embarass:  right now! </b>

i had a dream like that once, jk :lol:

JenRN · 07-31-2003, 09:19 PM

We are waiting Teri!

SCOTTSMYMAN · 08-01-2003, 11:06 AM

Funny Dan!

Yes, Teri get your mojo going!

TeriB19 · 08-03-2003, 11:28 PM

Ok, here goes:

I'm in Orlando by myself just to get away for awhile. My flight arrived at the airport around 11, I pick up my rental car and am looking for my hotel. Man I could use a cup of coffee or a latte or something like that, since I've been up since 5:00 a.m. So I pull off the highway and come upon a Starbucks and decide that would be a good place to stop. I go in and order my latte and take all my rental car paperwork to a small table in the corner to try to figure out where the hell I'm going to get to my hotel. I must have a totally confused look on my face because the next thing I know, there is a tall stranger standing over me and he asks if I need some help. I look up and see this tall handsome face smiling down at me. He has short short hair, and is wearing a sleeveless t-shirt that shows off these incredible biceps that I immediately envision wrapped around me. He says his name is Mark and he saw me looking a bit confused and wondered if he could help me out. I tell him I'm looking for the Days Inn Lake Buena Vista and he tells me that the hotel is off the exit he takes to get to his house. He asks if I'd like to follow him in my car and he'll show me where to go. We sit while we both drink our drinks and he asks me all about myself. I tell him I'm looking for some r&r away from the job and stress of home. I follow him out to the parking lot, and then I follow his car to the hotel. He pulls into the parking lot with me and I thank him for his help. He tells me to enjoy my stay and with that, he's off.

I check into my hotel, and after taking a long hot shower, all the while thinking about those biceps and how they would feel against my wet skin in the shower, I wrap my robe around me and suddenly hear the phone ringing. I rush out to answer it, and it's Mark. He said that he was thinking about me on his drive home and wondered if I'd like for him to show me around town. He picks me up around 4 and we head to Universal Studios. He takes me on all the wild roller coasters which is a sexy rush sitting next to this hard body of a man. We leave Universal and head to Pleasure Island to have dinner and do some dancing. The dance club is really crowded and our bodies are pressed together very very closely as the dancers all crowd the floor. The music pounds as we move to the beat as one body. It's very hot and as the music slows I feel his hot breath on my neck and those biceps wrap around me as we dance together. At this point we are looking into each others eyes and the same thought is going through our minds. Let's get out of here.

We get out to his car and before we even get into it, he has my back up against the car and he is kissing me deep, slow and soft and it is so hot my toes are curling up. We stay there just kissing intensely for what seems to be hours before tearing ourselves away from each other. We take his car back to his house, he grabs a bottle of wine and 2 glasses and takes me upstairs to the roof where he has a chaise lounge big enough for the two of us. Under the stars and the warm dark Florida sky he takes me in his arms and very slowly, kisses me, his tongue at first encircling my mouth, then entering it, still taking his time, teasing me. I feel his hands unbuttoning my blouse and caressing my bare shoulders. I take off his shirt to reveal a muscular chest that I immediately run my hands all over. His hands then move down to my shorts, which come off in a hurry. We both lay down on the chaise and proceed to explore each other with our hands and our mouths. The whole night is spent making love over and over again, each time we climax together and relax in each others arms before starting over again. As the sun comes up, we finally fall sound asleep. I believe I have found the r&r I was looking for.

Dogstar · 08-03-2003, 11:34 PM

As Susan Sarandon says in "Bull Durham"....Ohhhh, myyyyy!

facelessman · 08-04-2003, 12:41 AM

Quote: Originally posted by jimmy2sacs
oh man, why the hell did i come in here!!!!!! me eyes me eyes.

I hear ya!

TeriB19 · 08-04-2003, 06:01 AM

No boys allowed unless you have something worthwhile to contribute

.

Sheila63 · 08-04-2003, 07:34 AM

What a great way to start my Monday morning!!! Great fantasy, Teri.

It was definitely worth the wait.

SCOTTSMYMAN · 08-04-2003, 09:22 AM

That was awesome Teri. I can't find the right words and what actually came out of my mouth I don' t know how I would begin to express it!

devils_here · 08-04-2003, 10:27 AM

That was great! I agree, that is a wonderful way to start a hot sticky Monday morning. Thank you Teri

Kim V. · 08-04-2003, 11:22 PM

Oh... my.... God....

TeriB19 · 08-05-2003, 06:22 AM

That was a good OMG, wasn't it?

JenRN · 08-05-2003, 11:41 AM

WOW Teri!!!!! And you said you were dried out in the fantasy area, I think not!!!!!

That was spectacular!!!! Makes me want a cigerette and I don't even smoke!

crest tattoo · 08-05-2003, 03:50 PM

Dang Jen, nice avatar! Looking at that could make a girl fantasize!

07-28-2003, 12:50 PM	#976
Sheila63 USER INFO » Status: Opened My Eyes Posts: 5,748 Joined: Dec 2002 Currently: Offline	Great job, Kris!!! I'm proud of you too. Although I understand that it's a totally different form of creative writing, I was kind of nervous about posting my first poem in the Creative forum so I can relate to that feeling. I really enjoyed it and it was a wonderful way to start of the week. Teri, won't you at least share one that's in your head with us? __________________ I was selfish, but you still loved me You gave the greatest gift of all And you set me free Relearn Love

07-31-2003, 09:19 PM	#978
JenRN USER INFO » Status: Tree of Wisdom Posts: 7,519 Joined: Oct 2002 Currently: Offline	We are waiting Teri! __________________ "I don't want to know emptiness, take me down to the water wanna be baptized in your love far away from the lonliness, take my heart and wash away the fear let me be baptized in your love" ~Lenny Kravitz "Baptized"

08-03-2003, 11:28 PM	#980
TeriB19 Forum Diplomat USER INFO » Status: Saving Grace Posts: 12,439 Joined: Sep 2002 Currently: Offline	Ok, here goes: I'm in Orlando by myself just to get away for awhile. My flight arrived at the airport around 11, I pick up my rental car and am looking for my hotel. Man I could use a cup of coffee or a latte or something like that, since I've been up since 5:00 a.m. So I pull off the highway and come upon a Starbucks and decide that would be a good place to stop. I go in and order my latte and take all my rental car paperwork to a small table in the corner to try to figure out where the hell I'm going to get to my hotel. I must have a totally confused look on my face because the next thing I know, there is a tall stranger standing over me and he asks if I need some help. I look up and see this tall handsome face smiling down at me. He has short short hair, and is wearing a sleeveless t-shirt that shows off these incredible biceps that I immediately envision wrapped around me. He says his name is Mark and he saw me looking a bit confused and wondered if he could help me out. I tell him I'm looking for the Days Inn Lake Buena Vista and he tells me that the hotel is off the exit he takes to get to his house. He asks if I'd like to follow him in my car and he'll show me where to go. We sit while we both drink our drinks and he asks me all about myself. I tell him I'm looking for some r&r away from the job and stress of home. I follow him out to the parking lot, and then I follow his car to the hotel. He pulls into the parking lot with me and I thank him for his help. He tells me to enjoy my stay and with that, he's off. I check into my hotel, and after taking a long hot shower, all the while thinking about those biceps and how they would feel against my wet skin in the shower, I wrap my robe around me and suddenly hear the phone ringing. I rush out to answer it, and it's Mark. He said that he was thinking about me on his drive home and wondered if I'd like for him to show me around town. He picks me up around 4 and we head to Universal Studios. He takes me on all the wild roller coasters which is a sexy rush sitting next to this hard body of a man. We leave Universal and head to Pleasure Island to have dinner and do some dancing. The dance club is really crowded and our bodies are pressed together very very closely as the dancers all crowd the floor. The music pounds as we move to the beat as one body. It's very hot and as the music slows I feel his hot breath on my neck and those biceps wrap around me as we dance together. At this point we are looking into each others eyes and the same thought is going through our minds. Let's get out of here. We get out to his car and before we even get into it, he has my back up against the car and he is kissing me deep, slow and soft and it is so hot my toes are curling up. We stay there just kissing intensely for what seems to be hours before tearing ourselves away from each other. We take his car back to his house, he grabs a bottle of wine and 2 glasses and takes me upstairs to the roof where he has a chaise lounge big enough for the two of us. Under the stars and the warm dark Florida sky he takes me in his arms and very slowly, kisses me, his tongue at first encircling my mouth, then entering it, still taking his time, teasing me. I feel his hands unbuttoning my blouse and caressing my bare shoulders. I take off his shirt to reveal a muscular chest that I immediately run my hands all over. His hands then move down to my shorts, which come off in a hurry. We both lay down on the chaise and proceed to explore each other with our hands and our mouths. The whole night is spent making love over and over again, each time we climax together and relax in each others arms before starting over again. As the sun comes up, we finally fall sound asleep. I believe I have found the r&r I was looking for. __________________ MK: We're never gonna have the Super Bowl of Scott Stapp vs. Myles Kennedy in a sing-off - it's ridiculous. SP: Actually, we are setting that up. MT: It was in your contract when you signed up with us.

08-03-2003, 11:34 PM	#981
Dogstar Forum Diplomat USER INFO » Status: Young Grown Old Posts: 21,345 Joined: Sep 2002 Currently: Offline	As Susan Sarandon says in "Bull Durham"....Ohhhh, myyyyy! __________________ Silly monkeys give them thumbs they make a club and beat their brother down. How they survive so misguided is a mystery.

08-04-2003, 06:01 AM	#983
TeriB19 Forum Diplomat USER INFO » Status: Saving Grace Posts: 12,439 Joined: Sep 2002 Currently: Offline	No boys allowed unless you have something worthwhile to contribute. __________________ MK: We're never gonna have the Super Bowl of Scott Stapp vs. Myles Kennedy in a sing-off - it's ridiculous. SP: Actually, we are setting that up. MT: It was in your contract when you signed up with us.

08-04-2003, 07:34 AM	#984
Sheila63 USER INFO » Status: Opened My Eyes Posts: 5,748 Joined: Dec 2002 Currently: Offline	What a great way to start my Monday morning!!! Great fantasy, Teri. It was definitely worth the wait. __________________ I was selfish, but you still loved me You gave the greatest gift of all And you set me free Relearn Love

08-05-2003, 06:22 AM	#988
TeriB19 Forum Diplomat USER INFO » Status: Saving Grace Posts: 12,439 Joined: Sep 2002 Currently: Offline	That was a good OMG, wasn't it? __________________ MK: We're never gonna have the Super Bowl of Scott Stapp vs. Myles Kennedy in a sing-off - it's ridiculous. SP: Actually, we are setting that up. MT: It was in your contract when you signed up with us.

08-05-2003, 11:41 AM	#989
JenRN USER INFO » Status: Tree of Wisdom Posts: 7,519 Joined: Oct 2002 Currently: Offline	WOW Teri!!!!! And you said you were dried out in the fantasy area, I think not!!!!! That was spectacular!!!! Makes me want a cigerette and I don't even smoke! __________________ "I don't want to know emptiness, take me down to the water wanna be baptized in your love far away from the lonliness, take my heart and wash away the fear let me be baptized in your love" ~Lenny Kravitz "Baptized"

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