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Old 01-22-2004, 08:09 PM   #1
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Insomnia

Wild frenzied thoughts
that live inside my head
Like fireflies sparking,
they illuminate my brain
Ideas so varied and distant
changing with frightening velocity
Cataclysmic impulses strewn
with inspired revelations
Until the drugs kick in
and turn the lights out.
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We were both singers. Chris Cornell The first time we played he came to this little club and he told me that it was really good and he was thankful that I was there and that I was who I was, or something really nice, but the whole time he was saying this, he didn't realize but he was standing under a black light, and his teeth were glowing and his eyes were glowing. I remember it as my first conversation with Satan ..."
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Old 01-22-2004, 08:44 PM   #2
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Wow, way cool imagery there...Well done, well done!!! Love the fireflies sparking...That is one busy brain you describe there
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Old 01-22-2004, 08:51 PM   #3
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Quote: (Originally Posted by Dogstar) Wow, way cool imagery there...Well done, well done!!! Love the fireflies sparking...That is one busy brain you describe there


Just my brain in it's usual state. Probably why
I don't sleep well.
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We were both singers. Chris Cornell The first time we played he came to this little club and he told me that it was really good and he was thankful that I was there and that I was who I was, or something really nice, but the whole time he was saying this, he didn't realize but he was standing under a black light, and his teeth were glowing and his eyes were glowing. I remember it as my first conversation with Satan ..."
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Old 01-22-2004, 08:55 PM   #4
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Very vivid, though...Really cool poem! Thanks for sharing!
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Old 01-23-2004, 11:17 AM   #5
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I think that is your best one yet! Great imagery.
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Old 01-23-2004, 11:25 AM   #6
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Yep. Very relevant to me. Well done
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