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Old 07-01-2004, 07:18 PM   #1
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What do you say?

Hush now
don’t you say a word
To brake the silence would be so absurd
There’s not one voice here to be heard
So don’t you ever listen
Cover your ears
don’t hear a sound
Juts conform to me and don’t stand your ground
Remember to stay in line where your easily found
And careful about where you look around
Only see what I let you see
And all you should now is that will always be me
So only look at what I tell you to
That’s just what everyone will do
And one more important thing I need to say
You should look just like me in every little way
And its just not an option to disobey
That’s just how its been
Every generation time and time again
I’m just the standard so don’t blame me
I was created by you if you need to feel angry
But I make so many of you happy
And all take is your right to be free
So if you feel the need you can turn away
Because you have to give me that freedom
But I can give you so much if you stay
What do you say?
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Old 07-02-2004, 12:07 AM   #2
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Only see what i let u see Nice line !!!!!!!!!!!!YESSSSSSSSSSSSSS
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 07-02-2004, 06:10 PM   #3
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i like the passion behind your words so very good i liked it hey when your on again will you look at my newest poem please tell me what ya think
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