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How it feels
It's a cold lonely morning
And the days around The corner A little girl cries aloud Someone she trusts felt her so wrong (so wrong) How can she trust The ones she loves? When she was just used As a tool for love Psychological damage Has been done (it's all just been done) In a world Where no one thinks aloud The world is bound to lose a crown Everyday it's all just the same Such a game (chorus part) I know how it feels my baby I know how it feels(feels) I know nobody knows my baby Sometimes suicides' ideal And I don't know how I can go on my baby And I know how it feels How it feels(feels) (end)
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Re: How it feels
very strong potery nagpo and i loved how you did,nt leave out any taboo topics very good it shows a bold writer i like that and my over all opion no one ever really wants to admit how they truly feel but how ever i feel all that in your wrting, awsome job nagpo and thanks for sharing your stuff
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well, thank u and ur welcome.
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