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Old 03-20-2004, 05:15 AM   #1
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I haven't writen much for awhile... Guess I'm too stressed. Oh well, I wrote this yesterday. Please read and tell what you think. It's called "Blurred".

Here you go:

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Don't deny what you see
Forever livin' in you and me
Cold again, I am alone
Hiding between what's empty and what's wrong
Save my life, I fade away
I say goodbye, you run your way

A new misstake I can't afford
Harder to breath than never before
Nothing new, fades in dreams
In my thoughts, nothing's as it seems
Take my time, throw it away
Make me a key and let me stay

In my life, you will find
Find inside, in my mind
Cry again, cry my friend
Hideaway, hide again

A little boy, stands on his own
Let's seach for the moment when time starts to grow
Is that it, is that all?
Don't feel very much after all
Anyway... have to move on
Can't stand between dream and reality for too long

In my eyes, you will find
Find inside, in my mind
Try again, try my friend
Seach for me, and you'll see...

If you share my minds, we will find
Find inside, in the night
Bring me eyes, back to life
No more lies as we slowly dies

And as you cries, you will find
Find inside, in my mind
Cry again, cry my friend
And I'll do all I can to make this end

Peace, Lith
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Old 03-20-2004, 10:27 AM   #2
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*My Reply*
Bratt Face Ive Just Read It Oh About, 17 min, Ago Its Took Me That Long To Get It Back Together, And As Forest Gump, Would Say Face, Thats All I Have To Say About that
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Old 03-20-2004, 11:51 AM   #3
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Quote: (Originally Posted by creedsister) Bratt Face Ive Just Read It Oh About, 17 min, Ago Its Took Me That Long To Get It Back Together, And As Forest Gump, Would Say Face, Thats All I Have To Say About that

But you liked it, right?
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Old 03-20-2004, 01:05 PM   #4
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Hi There Yes I Did
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 03-20-2004, 05:21 PM   #5
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Quote: (Originally Posted by creedsister) Hi There Yes I Did

Goodie!
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Old 03-20-2004, 07:55 PM   #6
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Goodie Goodie Gum Drops hehe
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Old 03-22-2004, 05:02 AM   #7
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I'm glad you liked it, but hey!! Where's everybody else?
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Old 03-22-2004, 05:14 AM   #8
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Good job, Lith!
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Quote: (Originally Posted by Trees of Wisdom) Good job, Lith!

You liked it?
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Old 03-22-2004, 12:27 PM   #10
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He Said He Did, Or then again he could just said it to be nice HAHAHAHAHA,
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Old 03-22-2004, 03:01 PM   #11
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Quote: (Originally Posted by creedsister) He Said He Did, Or then again he could just said it to be nice HAHAHAHAHA,

As awlays, you're wicked kind!!
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Old 03-22-2004, 08:45 PM   #12
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Quote: (Originally Posted by extreme_LITHIUM) As awlays, you're wicked kind!!
I know
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I've read it Sebas.....

(Now ask me, ask me!)
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Souls...
they float like the memories I've opened,
Go...
and kiss all the butterflies I've broken,
Sow...
their wings to the coat of my misfortune,
Grow...
to reach the plains only I have spoken...


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Old 03-23-2004, 06:24 AM   #14
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Quote: (Originally Posted by WeatheredWoman) I've read it Sebas.....

(Now ask me, ask me!)

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Old 03-24-2004, 04:31 PM   #15
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Sooo?? What do you think?
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