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Old 01-23-2004, 10:21 PM   #1
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Who Knows...

Who Knows....

No one knows what's
inside my head, but me
and I won't tell myself

The dreams I dream
I cannot see, I hide
them from my eyes

Who I am suppose to be
is still a mystery to me
Play detective, solve the clues
and find the answers please.

Hopes come and go
without revelation
wishes without soul

To love you must unlock
your heart, but I've
hidden the key from me

All feelings and emotions
are hidden so far
behind my smile

Safely tucked away
am I behind my
walls so thick

So tell me again how
you know me and
want to know my dreams
Will you play detective
solve the clues and find
the answers please
..........for me.
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Old 01-23-2004, 10:43 PM   #2
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Wow i heard that one~~Pretty Darn good Gal
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Old 01-23-2004, 11:08 PM   #3
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I think this is definitely your best one, Linda. Very well written, deep feeling. I love it.
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Old 01-23-2004, 11:17 PM   #4
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Quote: (Originally Posted by TeriB19) I think this is definitely your best one, Linda. Very well written, deep feeling. I love it.

aw... so sweet. Thanks Teri.
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We were both singers. Chris Cornell The first time we played he came to this little club and he told me that it was really good and he was thankful that I was there and that I was who I was, or something really nice, but the whole time he was saying this, he didn't realize but he was standing under a black light, and his teeth were glowing and his eyes were glowing. I remember it as my first conversation with Satan ..."
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Old 01-24-2004, 03:46 AM   #5
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Quote: (Originally Posted by njcreedite)
So tell me again how
you know me and
want to know my dreams
Will you play detective
solve the clues and find
the answers please
..........for me.
woooahhhhhh!!!!!
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Old 01-24-2004, 11:29 AM   #6
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Quote: (Originally Posted by Sincirr) woooahhhhhh!!!!!
yes thay veres was cool yep i give it big Wooooahhhhh to
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Old 01-24-2004, 03:06 PM   #7
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Old 01-24-2004, 08:54 PM   #8
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woooahhhhhh!!!!!

Thanks all. Your kind words
mean a great deal.
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We were both singers. Chris Cornell The first time we played he came to this little club and he told me that it was really good and he was thankful that I was there and that I was who I was, or something really nice, but the whole time he was saying this, he didn't realize but he was standing under a black light, and his teeth were glowing and his eyes were glowing. I remember it as my first conversation with Satan ..."
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Old 01-24-2004, 09:11 PM   #9
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Wow, njcreedite, this one rocks!!! Love it...and this part is my favorite:

To love you must unlock
your heart, but I've
hidden the key from me
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Old 01-24-2004, 09:15 PM   #10
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Quote: (Originally Posted by Dogstar) Wow, njcreedite, this one rocks!!! Love it...and this part is my favorite:

To love you must unlock
your heart, but I've
hidden the key from me

Thanks Dogstar... My fav line was the first:..No one knows what's
inside my head, but me
and I won't tell myself

interesting to read what people like best...and think.
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We were both singers. Chris Cornell The first time we played he came to this little club and he told me that it was really good and he was thankful that I was there and that I was who I was, or something really nice, but the whole time he was saying this, he didn't realize but he was standing under a black light, and his teeth were glowing and his eyes were glowing. I remember it as my first conversation with Satan ..."
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Old 01-25-2004, 07:56 PM   #11
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Quote: Who I am suppose to be
is still a mystery to me
Play detective, solve the clues
and find the answers please.

This is my favorite line probably because that seems to be the way I've been feeling lately! Have to agree with Teri and say this is the best one yet! I loved it Linda. Thanks soo much for sharing your words!
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Old 01-25-2004, 09:42 PM   #12
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Quote: (Originally Posted by SCOTTSMYMAN) This is my favorite line probably because that seems to be the way I've been feeling lately! Have to agree with Teri and say this is the best one yet! I loved it Linda. Thanks soo much for sharing your words!
Thanks Kris...
Glad you guys like it. I'm not in agreement about it being the best
one..but it doesn't matter. I enjoy reading people's view's on it.
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We were both singers. Chris Cornell The first time we played he came to this little club and he told me that it was really good and he was thankful that I was there and that I was who I was, or something really nice, but the whole time he was saying this, he didn't realize but he was standing under a black light, and his teeth were glowing and his eyes were glowing. I remember it as my first conversation with Satan ..."
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