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Old 06-04-2005, 11:44 PM   #1
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Temptation

Our eyes meet...
And we dont need to speak...
Cheek to cheek...
We feel each other breathe...
Cant you see...
The temptation...
Such admiration...
Our dedication...
This fascination...
I see your anticipation...
With no hesitation...
But sweet patience...
Makeing my sprit...
Fly...So high...
Your desire alive...
Buring in your eyes...
You seduce me...
With your plea...
I cannot be free...
But I wish to be taken...
Under your control...
To be called upon...
By only one...
As their's...
As yours...
Take me in your arms...
Carry me to a world...
A world where theres only you and me...
A world where we can always be...
Full of compassion and love...
Trust and respect...
Take me there wont you...
And stay in this our own special place...
Our lips together...
Softly caressing...kissing...
Come show me...
This place I imagined...
If it doesnt exsist...
Lets create it...
Oh the temptation...
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Dancing around...
With joy found...
The music in my head loud...
Joyful noises sound...
Happiness surrounds...
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Old 06-05-2005, 12:02 AM   #2
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tempting And Awsome
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 06-05-2005, 07:02 AM   #3
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Wow, great writing.
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Old 06-05-2005, 03:47 PM   #4
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thank ya much!
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The music in my head loud...
Joyful noises sound...
Happiness surrounds...
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Old 06-22-2005, 02:50 PM   #5
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Quote: (Originally Posted by HR2004) thank ya much!
Whooooooooo that was good Anything About Temptation always is good to read
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